Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some people believe that forgetting past is better as it can make you hung up to your wrong decisions. However, Past can do more good than harm you, be it business or personal life. People can make informed decisions in their Personal life by not repeating the mistakes they have done before. Many business use historical data to improve their process and hence increase their productivity.
To begin with, successful people use past as the criterion to check the improvements in their life. For instance, a yoga instructors gradually see their past to see how far have they come in their flexibility. Same goes for body builders, they can track their results and get motivated by their muscle gains which once was just the dream when they started working out. These past memory motivates them to grow in their field. You learn a lot from your past not just in your professional world, but also in your personal life. Past helps you take informed decisions and not repeat the mistakes you have made before.
Furthermore, past has also helped many business grow. For example, Paleontologists use historical bones of dinosaurs to date their age. Many scientist use data from historical findings to achieve results in their own experiment. Moreover, the famous theory of evolution tells us about how we evolved from apes to humans. Historical data has also introduced a new field which is dominating the market and is known as data analytics. Use of data analysis is used in almost every field. Consultants use data analysis to help their clients increase their business, Sales team in the companies use it to find what worked for them in the past and find more methods to improve their sales in the future.
On the other hand, some people see past experiences as a bane and want to forget it and not learn from it. People think their past mistakes can cause them pain and suffering. While I support them with this point, I still believe that this pain from the past can be used to build a better future by not repeating the mistakes done in the past. past emotions can be used to grow in the future and derive the happiness one needs.
Conclusively, knowing about the past helps people learn from their mistakes and can help them in making informed and right decisions in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... believe that forgetting past is better as it can make you hung up to your wrong d...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memory'.
Suggestion: memory
...am when they started working out. These past memory motivates them to grow in their field. ...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
.... On the other hand, some people see past experiences as a bane and want to forget it and not...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Past
...epeating the mistakes done in the past. past emotions can be used to grow in the fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77833753149 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4703560699 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476070528967 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0510748537 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2272727273 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192002836257 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701647594063 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685917853076 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132261645674 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586089556406 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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