this topic raises the controversial issue whether knowing about the past cannot help people to make crucial decisions today. Indisputably, that "history is philosophy teaching by examples". Therefore, I totally disagree that we cannot get a benefit from the history and will not be able to make any decisions. Thus, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that history is a cardinal part of our life and myriad of decisions people are taking depends on the past history. On one hand, the first point that comes to the mind is that the past knowledge and all the innovative ideas we have are based on the past history. Further illustration require taking a look at this example, in the past there are a lot of information about the flying process and by using these information today people are able to fly.
Further, the second vital point that should be taken into account that the past is the crucial guiding for the today action. For instance, get the benefit from the past research methods and follow what they have build to boost the present research skills. In addition, from the past event we can learn about their success stories and avoid their failure instead of falling in the same mistakes. Consequently, the past is very important because we can get a lot of benefits that have a direct effect in our today decisions.
Last but not least, to take any decision is not an easy task, while deeper understanding we require in the past, the more sagacious decisions we make in the present. One striking example is by assuming there is a current problem about how to deal with a child, In deed the best solution is to understand deeply the best methods of dealing with children to take a decision. The contrary view point out that the past events do not help to take any decision, this is true in different aspects and when there is not any benefits from it. Thus, it is hard to hold there opinion into consideration.
All in all, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, our past is very important and almost all our decisions depend on the past events. Plus, the past is the base our present science, then, we become more sagacious and will enable us to understand and analysis any task deeply.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7506234414 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62276808822 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496259351621 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0775788476 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.058823529 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198153203235 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661809514074 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534920494466 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114578471117 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289909696939 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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