Knowing the past cannot help in making decisions today.
past is often what defines people. we are who we are today due to our past. Undeniably, it molds and shapes us into the individual that we become, but does that mean it helps us in making important decisions today?
Let us consider the possibility. such as, if today i wanted to drive to the mall for some shopping and there were two routes to reach my destination. the last visit in the past took me 30 minutes to drive through route 1 due to traffic where as I could have reached in just 20, considering the traffic on that route is a regular business and not due to some other event or reason, I know that I will waste 10 mins more on that route and can instead take the other one to get there. similarly, if in the past i have purchased clothes from a particular brand that decolored after a single wash, I will prefer not to buy again from the same brand. In these cases, the past definitely teaches us and helps us in making important decisions however it is advisable to acknowledge that we learn from the experiences, had i not experienced the traffic on the route or the bad quality of the cloth, i would not have known.
getting to experiences, in our day-to-day life we come across various decisions, some we have had experience or knowledge about and some that are new for our minds and thoughts to venture into. today, perhaps a new business opportunity could knock on my door, one that i have no idea or experience in but something i can definitely learn. While pondering over it, i might have no past relating to it to help me make the wise decision, nothing that would tell me if it is advisable or profitable to take the deal or whether i am better off saving myself the investment that would never fish any returns. This could definitely be the turning point of my career hence a highly crucial decision to make. Now that i have no past, does it help in deciding? not really. what can in turn definitely help is talking to people in the same field, those that have a past or present relating to it.
as inferred from the examples above, decisions, however important, may or may not relate to our past but somehow history and experiences are an added benefit to support these decisions even if it may not be patent always. knowing about the past can definitely help us in making today better. our present today shall become our past tomorrow and similarly shall help us shape our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44243792325 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48882976545 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494356659142 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5899437699 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0588235294 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318388130745 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110299744679 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999550109675 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227991033972 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616264183188 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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