In a democracy all citizens of the nation vouch to follow the same set of rules to maintain peace and decorum of the society. This set of rules make the basic framework and are agreed upon by the elected leaders from each neighbourhood, which doesn't mean anyone and everyone agreed upon the rules but it is how the process is designed so as not to effect anyone and to bring calm and peace in the nation.However, smoothly carrying out the operations the situations and conditions differ. Set of rules that are written upon mutual agreement and stored for further use is known as the constitution. This book can be published, shared among the citizens and shall be made accessible to all the citizens of the nation. However, there is a small group of people as we discussed earlier who doesn't have to agree but still the rules are applicable for them, this is where problems arise. People that agree on most common things because it benefits the majority, nevertheless, the minority needs are different as it might arise a situation that can force them to extreme brutality. Therefore, there is a high need to look at rules locally and accept upon few exemptions to be made to treat everyone equally. Minority group can take up few instances that are harmful to their livelihood and can file a petition which then it would be verified and passed in the parliament where everyone who are elected for the betterment of the communities discuss upon the changes and think of possible outcomes, their opinions add new perspective into the bill and if the bill gets approved that minor changes could be incorporated as sub clauses in the main article that is published. This flexibility makes the government formed in a democracy more transparent. Decisions made over the large platform to be in favour of everyone not ignoring the minorities or making harm to anyone in the process of making better life for everyone.
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 16
- Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals 75
- A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting lethargy and other signs of illness After the recall the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food an 50
- A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting lethargy and other signs of illness After the recall the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food an 50
- Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others What might have caused this situarion How to improve it 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79393939394 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68666058281 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.271309364 60.3974514979 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.2 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0627055017779 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267560219051 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287555677649 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627055017779 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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