In the given Issue prompt, the author tries to define the flexibility of a law. He asserts that a flexible law must be able to accommodate various circumstances, times and places. However, one cannot aver that a particular law is flexible. The flexibility of a law depends upon not only what factors it takes into account but also its implementer. I mostly agree with what the author has stated however, no single law is perfect and one needs to consider various aspects other than what has been written in the law to determine its limberness.
The hockey team of the Indian Rio Olympics contingent was supplied with substandard paraphernalia by the Indian Sports Ministry. Why? Because, there is a steadfast rule which all bureaucrats have to follow. In any contract whatsoever, the cheapest possible alternative is to be pursued. This law may seem to be valid and rational in the case of floating tenders for building of roads, coal auction or even spectrum auction. But providing low quality equipment to a team that is representing India at an international level is preposterous. Thus, laws should be flexible enough for taking into account various determinable and indeterminable factors.
Let us consider another scenario where a juvenile has fatally shot his relative for repetitively torturing him emotionally. In the eyes of law, that kid has committed a heinous crime and should be awarded death penalty. But, here the law framed should be flexible enough to consider the circumstances, time of event and the place where the crime took place. For instance, Sanjay Dutt (Indian actor) illegally bought and kept Ak-47 rifles at his home during riots for his family’s safety. This is a petty crime and was committed unknowingly and for no malicious reason. But he was sentenced to five years in jail. Again, this example underscores the importance of flexibility of a law.
Conversely, not all laws need to be flexible. For example, according to International Water Treaty no country can own the oceans beyond 200 nautical miles of its coastline i.e. the waters beyond the 200 nautical miles are owned by nobody and everybody. If a country is powerful enough to defy these laws, then it is not acceptable. All signatories of this treaty must religiously follow whatever has been written in the treaty and in no circumstance defy it. Here, the laws laid out must be rigid and should not give in to or be biased towards the might of a particular country.
In a nutshell, even though it is important for the laws to be flexible to take account of various circumstances, places and time, these factors must be clearly defined and mostly shouldn’t be compromised in any case. However, we need to note that the meaning of a law depends on the interpretation of its implementer. The implementer should be careful enough to understand and be mature enough for the law to become flexible, after all, law are just words scribbled on a paper.
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- Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagre 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lia by the Indian Sports Ministry. Why? Because, there is a steadfast rule which all bu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'after all', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in any case']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226211849192 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.166965888689 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771992818671 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574506283662 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0305206463196 0.0444667217837 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104129263914 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0448833034111 0.0406280797675 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93082368965 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0341113105925 0.030933414821 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00179533213645 0.0016655270985 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.11131059246 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233393177738 0.0249443105267 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016157989228 0.0148568991511 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2960.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 497.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95573440644 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356136820926 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261569416499 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189134808853 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122736418511 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93082368965 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 219.290929204 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523138832998 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.546835435 55.4138127331 113% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4345856058 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.9069416499 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.47183098592 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34977562886 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0812839090963 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0830646699354 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433345123785 0.547984918172 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147303856398 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111618261592 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105725613825 0.0892212321368 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364425136869 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0438487355689 0.0692045440612 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240036997172 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887039660356 0.0653680567796 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.