Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are playing vital role in order to maintain the peace in the society.The author asserts that laws should be flexible enough to take accountof various circumstances,times and places.I agree with the author statement.Laws must be flexible enough respective of situations.I will support my view in the following paragraphs.
firstly,Laws are nowdays becomes necessity for the society.Without laws,chaos will create amongs the people,people will not remain under certain limit.Change is law of nature so these laws should be change according to the requirement based on the certain situations.For example-During terrorist attack,Government arose to implemetnt curfue,do not allow citizens to get out of their home just because of their security only.So in the attack security is more important for the people ,so government should implement it in a critical requirement.
Secondly,Government of any nation should always think of the welfare of the socierty.So its their responsiblity to change the laws in the periodic time in order for the welfare.Also we there is a more flood in areas due to heavy rains,Government need to shut down all the local and train services in order to avoid the further disaster effects,so the the time and circumstances related to this phenomenon need to change.
Furthermore,During world war II,all we aware of,that japanese soil attacked atom boms in the United states, and we were all known what are the difficultiess faced by Us during those days.So if there are laws related to using nuclear technology such effects can be make appease,And government is now activelt implementing these laws for the welfare of a society.
Moreover,Government also put laws of ,restriction on the use of plastic bags,as they cause the harm to the environment so government ban on the plastic bags,which is in fact good for the society.Overall, in the conclusion, the laws should be change according to time,circumstances, and situation for the welfare of society and ultimately for the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40952380952 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59697529774 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 23.0359550562 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0194847458 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 340.8 118.986275619 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 23.4991977007 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 5.21951772744 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252647947212 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15305274068 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144353772922 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15305274068 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144353772922 0.0667264976115 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 14.1392134831 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 48.8420337079 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 12.1743820225 238% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 11.2143820225 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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