“Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places”.
Laws are a set of rules and regulations that are put forward by authorities, so that individuals can lead a peaceful life. The debate, whether these rules and regulations should be implemented irrespective of various factors such as circumstances, times and places is contentious. I agree to that fact that the implementation of these laws is dependent on crucial factors such as circumstances, times and places.
First of all, Laws are implemented without taking into account the said factors so as to foster peace and hinder actions of individuals that are detrimental to the health of society. This enables every individual to control their behavior and lead a peaceful life. While this statement seems to be true, such implementation of laws considers all human beings to possess uniform characters and behavior. Moreover, such implementation of laws could also hinder an individual to exercise their fundamental rights, which could lead to public outcry. Throughout history, people have revolted against the government due to the laws which were severe and against the people that lead to many rebellions and wars such as the French revolution, the American Revolution, the Indian Independence movement. These movements and revolutions were a result of dissent and disagreement of the people against the obstinate rules and policies that hindered their freedom.
Secondly, inflexible laws leads to alienate the society and the government to grow and foster with changing times. Many countries had been implemented certain laws that restrict women the right to drive vehicles. This situation had received widespread criticism which denied the development of women, and thus the development of the community. However, some countries such as Saudi Arabia had recently took the matter into consideration and updated the law which enabled women the right to drive, thereby leading to women empowerment. Likewise, churches were not allowed to be constructed in the Middle East in the 1970’s.The laws were rigid that it hindered the growth of the attracting citizens from around the world. However, understanding the situation, various rules and regulations were amended that made countries such as United Arab Emirates to be a sophisticated country Therefore, it could be understood that flexible laws drives the development of the community and helps in attracting individuals with skills and knowledge that could foster development.
Similarly, laws should be flexible enough so as to make accurate decisions that brings justice to the community. There are situations in which an individual violates a law without purpose. Laws should provide a platform that gives flexibility to the authority to understand the circumstance and make decisions accordingly. For instance, heinous crimes such as murder are done by individuals. However, the decision makers should look into various factors that lead to the crime. There are chances wherein the crime was committed deliberately or for one’s own protection. In such complex cases wherein the situations change, laws must provide a framework so that correct decisions are forward tat commensurate with the situation and the nature of crime. Such a system helps in people to accept and respect the laws while maintaining peace in the society.
Laws help in bolstering peace in the society. However, if laws are made to be inflexible, it cannot be received in a positive light from the citizens, which could lead to widespread issues. Flexible laws helps in the development of society by understanding and respecting the human nature , empowering the needs of humanity and ,most importantly, making correct decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3108.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44308231173 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02860181761 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46234676007 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 964.8 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1534591183 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9615384615 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250151319829 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069705415262 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653621395226 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141868571958 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360684096094 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.