Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling reasons

Luck is a factor which is very difficult to explain, some people say it is hard work which is the key to success and luck merely plays a role. of course, sometimes luck is very important, for example when you are perfectly ready for going to a party and it suddenly rains or you find someone on the road while going for work after a long time. The world is full of coincidences, our universe itself is believed to be made with a combination of a lot of coincidences. When I talk about success, I don’t think that luck is that important in determining success as the work ethics.

Albert Einstein famous quote “Success is 90% Hard work and 10% luck” this conveys all. One of the most successful scientists in the world itself does not believe that luck is a deciding factor in success. Luck always supports a person who does hard work and person who do hard work will always be ethical because he knows the value of hard work. Success by taking shortcuts is ephemeral but success gained from doing hard work and keeping yourself within work ethics is perennial.

Cricket is a perfect example of how work ethics is more important, in this game it is taught to every sportsperson to be honest in even the most diverse situation, winning or losing the game does not matter but playing fair matters. Once I was watching a match between India and Australia, since it was a very crucial match for both the teams, so losing team will get disqualified. One of the players of India which is the best player in the Indian team got out very early, he started walking towards the pavilion despite umpire's decision not-out, because he itself knows that he is out. The team although suffered due to this initially but the eventual result was favorable. The cricket is also called as gentlemen game because ethics are important in determining success than luck or any other factor did. The players and teams were also rewarded with fair play award annually for their honesty and hard work.

This learning has also helped me in my life many times, one I was going to the test center for taking my exam. I was actually not confident about whatever I had studied because I was in fever for 2 days and I was not able to concentrate on my studies. Suddenly my cell phone ringed, it was a call from one of my friends, he told me that the question paper is leaked and he has all the question. He called me to told me the answers of objective type question, but before he could utter a single word, I straight away dismissed the call. I could have gotten all the answers that day, but I instead keep faith in my hard work. I scored a very good score by being ethical.

I remembered one I participated in a drawing competition, I worked very hard and submitted my drawings but when results were declared I was not in the list of successful students. I talked to the coordinators about this matter, they told me that your name is not even in the list of consolation prize winners, I was completely shocked. I further got to know that they somehow misplaced my drawings and because they were not able to find my drawings when judges were deciding the winner, I didn’t get any position. They apologized to me and also told me that my drawings are far better than even the winner. Thus, luck sometimes may become important when you have done a lot of hard work, but I must say the hard work should be within the boundaries of work ethics and success will be inevitable.

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Average: 5.9 (7 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...o success and luck merely plays a role. of course, sometimes luck is very importan...
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Line 5, column 809, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cess than luck or any other factor did. The players and teams were also rewarded wi...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a very good score by being ethical. I remembered one I participated in a draw...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not in the list of successful students. I talked to the coordinators about this m...
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Line 9, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rize winners, I was completely shocked. I further got to know that they somehow m...
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Line 9, column 619, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'luck'.
Suggestion: sometimes luck
... far better than even the winner. Thus, luck sometimes may become important when you have done...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.5258426966 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 33.0505617978 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2843.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 630.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5126984127 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00997013923 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.511370464 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455555555556 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3693474106 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.72 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199414466817 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060469257077 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588739945099 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123434134262 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715485682821 0.0667264976115 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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