The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
We are in a generation where we have a lot of luxuries and conveniences when compared to any of our previous generations. Internet for free information, cell phones to connect easily, and even the modern day transportations. Modern technology plays a very important role for each of our daily needs of life. I disagree with the statement as altogether the luxuries and conveniences have made us more independent.
We have grown by hearing from our parents, about the difficulties they and their parents had to face in getting education. Now, with the availability of the Internet, we can learn anything. Online education is a great example. Proper utilization of these facilities has indeed changed the face of society. People with education are boons to the society. This has indeed made us self reliant and independent.
Our conveniences have in fact made us think more efficiently. Earlier when people have high blood pressure, they were called hypertension. Now we have technologies and science to know more about the pathophysiology and the mechanism of how people become hypertensive. New careers and fields are developing that helps us to understand our surroundings better. People seek to be part of the new field and their mindset is changed. This creates a stronger generation.
In the past, with a lot of time lost in physical labor, we had limited time for developing our personality or career. Now with the inventions like microwave, or a car, vacuum cleaner that help us in our daily life to not worry about the mundane things. People have sufficient time to develop their career or be active in social activities. All of these ultimately boosting their personality and making them more self-confident and poised.
There are always two sides of the coin. The technologies, which bring us all the luxuries and conveniences, also make us dependent on them and lazy. A cash register may be doing more of the calculations otherwise we might be doing ourselves. It can also be seen that it saves a lot of resources and makes the cashier job more efficient and well organized.
In conclusion, luxuries and conveniences act as a bolster to our development both personal and professional. It makes us use our human abilities and take it to the next level.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227817745803 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.163069544365 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743405275779 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503597122302 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0935251798561 0.0444667217837 210% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10071942446 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0479616306954 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05967106429 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263788968825 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0911270983213 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00959232613909 0.0249443105267 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119904076739 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2278.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 452.878318584 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02645502646 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314814814815 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253968253968 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195767195767 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148148148148 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05967106429 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542328042328 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 60.4836870176 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5384615385 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9300574637 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.269230769231 0.674092028746 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 39.9352869353 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.2265625 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422334903225 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0653411299301 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0528226832444 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463009112045 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138471774085 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137057825319 0.161403998019 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082206059482 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28969111857 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0474905671842 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264969331509 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241766591533 0.0653680567796 37% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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