The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
here author is undermining the sake of luxurious and non-spartan life by giving reason that it can make person weak and person cant withstand in critical condition.
here i m copletly agree with author.
in the era that we are living, technology hav made our life so easy, continuosly decreasing our physical efforts day by day. we are getting addicted to convenience
in all task, we are always seeeking for easy way for any workload. so this all can emasculate our courage to fight in absence of this convencing availability.
evevn worst part about rich people is they are also used to luxuries. luxuries is something that can provide than one person need. even they are ot doing a little
physical effort to whole day. ther are addicted to over and over easiest way of each task. there are many disadvantage also.but our main agenda is hoe people are
feeling so deblitiated in absence of this comforts.
as example ancient people was prepatetic for going anywhere. then the invention of wheel came in to existence, the pointis that ancient people ws so
independent for travellinh. he was not dependent on vehicle as we are. so they were physically strong also due to physical effort.before invention of calculater
people were so fast aour mental calcolation. and now days children are scared if calculator will not allowed in exams. like wise other example
the use of all this luxuries and convenience have made our life so lazy that we forget that advancement of technology is not for being dependent. we are so addicted
that we are feeling that, without technology and
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g, technology hav made our life so easy, continuosly decreasing our physical effo...
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...easing our physical efforts day by day. we are getting addicted to convenience i...
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.... we are getting addicted to convenience in all task, we are always seeeking for ...
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...seeeking for easy way for any workload. so this all can emasculate our courage to ...
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...nce of this convencing availability. evevn worst part about rich people is they ar...
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...nce of this convencing availability. evevn worst part about rich people is they are also...
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...ople is they are also used to luxuries. luxuries is something that can provide than one ...
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... that can provide than one person need. even they are ot doing a little physical ef...
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...a little physical effort to whole day. ther are addicted to over and over easiest w...
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...over and over easiest way of each task. there are many disadvantage also.but our main...
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...ver easiest way of each task. there are many disadvantage also.but our main agenda is hoe people ...
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... each task. there are many disadvantage also.but our main agenda is hoe people are ...
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...so.but our main agenda is hoe people are feeling so deblitiated in absence of thi...
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... feeling so deblitiated in absence of this comforts. as example ancient people...
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...tiated in absence of this comforts. as example ancient people was prepatetic f...
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...ople was prepatetic for going anywhere. then the invention of wheel came in to exist...
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...ople ws so independent for travellinh. he was not dependent on vehicle as we are....
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...was not dependent on vehicle as we are. so they were physically strong also due to...
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...e were so fast aour mental calcolation. and now days children are scared if calcula...
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...ldren are scared if calculator will not allowed in exams. like wise other example th...
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...f calculator will not allowed in exams. like wise other example the use of all th...
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...ed in exams. like wise other example the use of all this luxuries and convenienc...
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...ke wise other example the use of all this luxuries and convenience have made our ...
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... technology is not for being dependent. we are so addicted that we are feeling ...
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...ology is not for being dependent. we are so addicted that we are feeling that, ...
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...for being dependent. we are so addicted that we are feeling that, without techno...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224137931034 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.186206896552 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113793103448 0.0880659088768 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0724137931034 0.0497285424764 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0586206896552 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0655172413793 0.0406280797675 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74537266581 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241379310345 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.051724137931 0.0997080785238 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137931034483 0.0249443105267 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00689655172414 0.0148568991511 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1593.0 2732.02544248 58% => OK
No of words: 269.0 452.878318584 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9219330855 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327137546468 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252788104089 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182156133829 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133828996283 0.132149295362 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74537266581 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.48968727796 120% => OK
Word variations: 61.5782195721 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8235294118 23.380412469 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0953016948 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7058823529 141.124799967 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 23.380412469 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.674092028746 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.94800884956 243% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.21349557522 575% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.1023398207 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.34782608696 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195998381688 0.391690518653 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0775618808762 0.123202303941 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.078126086755 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621355782101 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.234612471634 0.149214159877 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710494750318 0.161403998019 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533861938887 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.119512554471 0.385218514788 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0858954593241 0.0692045440612 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872104871838 0.275328986314 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415172911146 0.0653680567796 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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