The main benefit of study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantlly different from people who lived in earlier times.
History innvolves the study of what has occured in the past. Studying History is beneficial because it helps us to improvise ourselves and makes us aware about the mistakes which we have done in the past, gviving us a sense of assurance the such mistakes will not be repeated in near future. I agree to the given statement that the main benefit of study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantlly different from people who lived in earlier times. The reasons to agree on this statement are the basic human nature and the inherent feelings which remain the same. The laws and regulations which developed in the past are still followed and accepted. And the modes of entertainment are still nearly the same with some addition. On these grounds i agree on the given statement. The study of history brings an individual from a state of ignorance to a state of enlightenment. Thus, making the study of history a crucial part to develop and evolve.
To begin with, The basic human nature will always remain the same. The same values and morals which have been carried along from decades. The basic human nature, emotions and feelings like affinity towards the opposite gender, discipline and equality which were followed by our predecessors and will be followed by the succesors as well. Human nature like ego, politeness, respect for the country., Love for the parents and relatives and also a feeling of security with the close ones have been followed since centuries. And which will be the same till many coming years. So, with this point i would like to stenghten my agreement.
Secondly, The laws and regulations which were implemented in the past are still intact and the citizens of today still abide to the same laws and principles with some development according to the changing times. For instance, the policies of new government formation after a tenure of four to five years is still followed. Also, the laws for the criminals which were decided according to the intensity of crime are still the same. This point augments my agreement to the given statement.
Thirdly, The modes of entertainment which originated long ago are the same modes of entertainment for todays people. Movies, theatre and play were the main modes of entertainment which are still enjoyed by todays generation. Also, sports like football, cricket and eminent events like olympics are enjoyed by the people till date. In the past, communication was done through letters and pigeons. Transport and travel were done with the help of camels, elephants and horses. Today in the 21st century due to human evolution and implementation of technology, The modes have evolved but the roots are still the same. in todays world, Internet and mobile phones are used for communication and automobiles, planes and ships are used for travel and transport but these technologies have the evolved from those similar enchoate roots. On these grounds i would like to support my agreement to the given statement.
Thus, History not only makes us more pragmatic and experienced but also makes us aware about the mistakes which have been done in the past. Just as a tree which grows with age to a height from the ground but yet is being supported by the roots, same is in the case of history, the roots have bolstered our present and fortify our coming future. So, i would like to conclude that the main benefit of study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantlly different from people who lived in earlier times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2944.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 603.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88225538972 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58861203034 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414593698176 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 947.7 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8430587964 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253841613905 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076156721622 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213759808552 0.0758088955206 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170416308805 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186008217428 0.0667264976115 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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