We can learn a lot from the history in that as " The one who do not accept the past can not embrace the future" the German prime minister Merkel said, which I can't agree more. Indeed, after summarizing the past we can make more progress on the way to our future,(of course, there were lots of people who failed to learn from the history). In this way, the history to me, is far beyond the concept that we can learn how much different we are than our ancestors, it is a significant lesson for us to know who we were, who we are as well as who we should be.
History lessons are tough, more fierce than the war, further than our brains. When we learned histroy at middle school, we knew that ,the US did not win the North Korea War (1950-1952), I was wondered how can Chinsese Army can compete with the armed to teeth US troops? Because their weapons are much more advancing than ours, which I belive it was a war of rifles against rockets. As when I grew up, I finally get to know that without the help of Russia, we can not fight against the powerful US Army. For example, at that time, the Russian Planes carrying bombs were painted on Chinese Airforce Badge, the siolders with blue eyes take the PLA's clothes, meanwhile, heavy weapons were carried from Moscow to the bank of Yalu River, the border of China and North Korea. Hence it makes sense in the end, with Chinese Government yielding to the Ruissa on the issue of Border of Northeast of China.
So tough, So obsecure as we conceived, the History, as we often said , is a little girl made up what ever the authority want.Here I do not want to bring up more debate on the specific issue, just like what I emphsized previously, we should make clear of the past then to be a wise individual, because the difference between the present and the past is one of the factor which the history shows us.I belive one can write a novel to tell us about this trivial stuff like what the people wore in the past which I believe is important to the research of the history, while to most of us, being clever as a historist is more realistic and benificial.
It saves lives.
When my dad was at Unversity , he met the most controversial political event in China,which millions of students were at the Tian'an Men square decades ago. Yes you may heard of it a bit. While absolutely my dad was not in Beijing at that time, on the other hand, he was asked, even baned by his tutor, the history professor, to stay at Universities' Library, do not show up." It will kill" said the old professor. When my dad told me this, I could do nothing except for admiring this old but proficient history professor. He knew how this event was and how it would be, as there is another old saying that the histories of human beings from the old to new are always the same.Yes they surely are.
In conclusion, besides these diffrerences outside which can divide us from our ancestor, the history is more significant to teach us how to live a better life, wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, except for, for example, in conclusion, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 33.0505617978 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4190647482 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37261434437 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51618705036 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.11184198 60.3974514979 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.529411765 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7058823529 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133866278536 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044997986198 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368692527937 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836036465775 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361516975528 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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