People today are still eager to know facts about how humans lived in olden times. Their behavior, dress code, their food consumption habits, art forms etc. are few elements people today have tried to understand in depth about human beings what they used to follow in past and how are they replicated or changed today. All these elements have changed over a period of time due to changes in the behavior and way people think.
Few decades back from now, people have taken efforts to excavate articles used by humans in past. People have found out utensils, sculptures, paintings, artifacts etc what humans had used during that period. After observing all these old utensils, the utensils now used by common man can be easily differentiated from them. Today, to cook food man has made utensils made up of alloys like brass and copper, which act as good conductor of heat. Previously, coal was used to run the engines of trains, but, today trains run on electricity. People today have started using lighter for striking fire on a stove whereas long time back dried grass, wood was utilized to burn fire. Study of history has helped people to understand how humans lived centuries ago. This study has enabled people to enhance their own skills and upgrade themselves to the modern techniques.
During olden times people used to send letters to communicate with people at long distances, whereas, today man is using email, mobiles phones, various sorts of messaging softwares to communicate at long distances in fraction of seconds. Studying history has helped man advance the existing technology like from invention of wheel to building automobiles that are coupled with an internal combustion engine. Continuing the use of railways as a mode of transport but making a significant advancement in the technology by enabling it to run at high speeds to commute faster to longer distances, man has proved that there has been a huge transformation in methods used for traveling faster. Without capturing photos and putting a series of these photographs to create a video, today man wouldn't get the idea of making film and projecting it on large screen.
Art forms such as music, dance, sculptures, painting, literature, films etc. are all followed and continued even today, all because of studying history and understanding how man came up with such ideas in the past. Talking over a telephone, using internet, commuting through airplanes, using GPS to navigate locations, all these are now being used by people to commute and communicate faster. All these technologies were invented by scientists in the past but the advancement in the technology has made easy for man to utilize these tools efficiently. Hence, study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'whereas', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298850574713 0.240241500013 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.206896551724 0.157235817809 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632183908046 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287356321839 0.0497285424764 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0172413793103 0.0444667217837 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124521072797 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0842911877395 0.0406280797675 207% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6407024046 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044061302682 0.030933414821 142% => OK
Particles: 0.00191570881226 0.0016655270985 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.0613026819923 0.0997080785238 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00191570881226 0.0249443105267 8% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.0148568991511 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2884.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 470.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13617021277 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370212765957 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257446808511 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170212765957 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121276595745 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6407024046 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53829787234 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 64.1502052821 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.380952381 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.152344602 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.380952381 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.380952380952 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 48.125633232 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.00757575758 1.64882698954 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44057256605 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0909255686624 0.123202303941 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0550254888386 0.077325440228 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458117290333 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130017439263 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15877286906 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125302507253 0.0892212321368 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382202029857 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0334311968674 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313124061387 0.275328986314 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708853809582 0.0653680567796 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.70907079646 406% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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