Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However,since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations,we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
In this argument explaining the People have regularly incoculation against cow flu in areas where the disease is detected.so people small possobility that a person will die.In this argument author cannot explian the in which area have cow flu are detected and how many people are are died,He assemption is people have regulary inoculation so it willnot be die to the flu,but it will not explain how many people are die after takes the incoulations.
Firstly,In this arguement author can assume if the people are regular check up so cow flu is not be affect, Bit regular check up in is not possble to the all people because the all peoples are not a same conditon.Author say the routing check up to people but i am disagree this statement because the if peoples are regular check up time and money are use for this.All people are not regular check up because it's conditon is not same to other.
Secondly,If people the small possibility can die to the flu as a result of the inculation so people is what gerenty it will be not die after check up regular.Author cannot exaplin how many people are saved after regular check up.if it will not affect the flu in the area which have detected the this disease. so it will be go one time for examination so it will not affect the flu in future.so will be more person can do this maner because ut will be not be affect by the this flu it the resone for examine.
Thirdly,people have die to this flue so will regular check up and it safe for flu in which condition it will follows after examine the doctor.Some people have regular chack up it can be affected by the flu author is not explain the no of people are check up and it will safe for affected by the flu.
In this Argument i conclude that if the people are resident in which area have detected the disease of flu so people have one time check up and it will not affect by this flu in future and what is the consideration can do so it will be not affectd by this flu.It is very genual reson for the the check up and safe our life for the flu and die.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212871287129 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.210396039604 0.157235817809 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0742574257426 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0668316831683 0.0497285424764 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039603960396 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121287128713 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0321782178218 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44748382949 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148514851485 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0123762376238 0.0016655270985 743% => OK
Determiners: 0.113861386139 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.049504950495 0.0249443105267 198% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0247524752475 0.0148568991511 167% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2048.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 385.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31948051948 6.0361032391 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267532467532 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.176623376623 0.280924506359 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0987012987013 0.200843997647 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0571428571429 0.132149295362 43% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.44748382949 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 219.290929204 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.335064935065 0.48968727796 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.3057610706 55.4138127331 64% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 64.1666666667 23.380412469 274% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5499213685 59.4972553346 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 341.333333333 141.124799967 242% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.1666666667 23.380412469 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.674092028746 247% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.21349557522 518% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 81.829004329 51.4728631049 159% => OK
Elegance: 1.15625 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34929433291 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.430495984204 0.123202303941 349% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106048741955 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.941250547656 0.547984918172 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0853638833816 0.149214159877 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256160144951 0.161403998019 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852389691199 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.535493525742 0.385218514788 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.135139933793 0.0692045440612 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265239504079 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072149444995 0.0653680567796 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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