Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
Mass media and internet is one of the fastest growing industry. With rise of smartphones, tablets in past decade the industry has taken gained uttermost importance in a user's life. I believe that internet has caused people's attention span to get shorter. There are so much content in a day that no one can ever get bored sitting around.
Mass media and internet have given access to various source of information at the palm of user's hand. There are short articles on the internet that gains attention off the user. Although the articles might not have the high level of language what books have but they give enough knowledge what once upon a time could only be received by books. There are so many movies, and television shown in the world that now people watch more than one at a time. It has reduced the attention span of a person as that person would not be able to focus on one thing.
The vast information given by mass media and internet are also boon for the society. Now a person has knowledge of various sectors in society. The information helps people to understand different ethnic cultures, religions, job sectors that people have no idea about. It has also created job opportunities and helps people get jobs in their relevant sector. Mass media and Internet have globally affected the society. It brings people closer and helps them make more rational decision.
Mass media and internet is bane to society that helps to unearth the talent within you.
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| 2019-12-17 | srujanakeerthi | 66 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
... taken gained uttermost importance in a users life. I believe that internet has cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 256.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7734375 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36655571189 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2717802866 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.375 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 5.21951772744 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325545006758 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107867649883 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730955853271 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178199848154 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546968486835 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.