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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...estyle. Moreover, to discuss about the students role in adapting to the exponentially c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...ine classrooms and video-based learning have become the ritual of the day and the gi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3256.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 600.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42666666667 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01104448471 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 1044.9 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.526271704 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.230769231 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266778105011 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668113029059 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460875658623 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142132484264 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759662440498 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 199.0 100.480337079 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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