Men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their physical differences.
The claim concludes that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks. because of their physical differences. Although, there are innate physical differences among the two genders, it has been certainly seen that both the genders can equally excel almost any field. However, I fundamentally disagree with the aforementioned claim.
Firstly, in some places of the world it is considered that men are superior and are designed to do hard tasks. However, men cannot give birth to babies, this hard task is attributed to women. Also, women cannot give birth without men. So, the individual tasks are attributed to the each gender based on the corporal differences.
Secondly, when we talk about the world of arts, there are singers, dancers, actors etc who are lionized by the gentry and these highly celebrated virtuoso are both men and women. When we talk about business, there are women ruling as CEOs and other top positions of giant companies, which were once attributed to men.
Thirdly, even there is physiological differences between men and women brain, women are surpassing men in the field of science and technology as well. If we have Neil Amstrong an astronaut who visited moon first, we also have the super astronauts like Sunita Williams and Kalpana Chawala.
Finally, it is lucid that men and women, both are contributing equally in all the fields disregarding their innate physical differences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Because
... are not equally suited for many tasks. because of their physical differences. Although...
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Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are not equally suited for many tasks. because of their physical differences. Although...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are physiological differences'?
Suggestion: there are physiological differences
...nce attributed to men. Thirdly, even there is physiological differences between men and women brain, women are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Finally, it is lucid that men and women, both are contributing equally in all the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15086206897 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68411993983 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.517526905 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429688796536 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15962500589 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149154637133 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224897978775 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126667058554 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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