Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The notion, today, is that men and women are equal in every sphere of life. In other words, people should not prefer one of the two genders to another because they are equally suited for all tasks. but, in the process of giving credence to such a notion, people usually ignore the inherent physical differences between men and women and as a result think that men and women are equally suited for all of the jobs. I disagree with the given prompt and to prove my point, I shall be giving a couple of examples in the coming paragraphs.
Firstly, there are conspicuous differences in the physical structure of men and women. men are generally more stronger and quicker while women are more agile and lissome. women are better suited for jobs that do not require much strength whereas men can be better utilized in the areas where strength is paramount. For example, lumberjacks are usually men because it requires great strength and power. if a women were to do the same job, it would take more time. this is in no way to suggest that women cannot do the jobs that men do or vice versa. this is just to point out that, because of the physical differences, men will be more advantageous in the areas where strength is the most important factor. In construction, for instance, people have to carry heavy machines, materials and other things. A woman would be of little use in such a profession. they would require more time to do raw labour and this could slow down the entire work-line. So, in jobs where strength is paramount, men will certainly be more useful because of their physical structure.
Moreover, in the areas that require more agility and less strength, women are more advantageous. men would be maladroit in such cases. For example, while handling an infant, a woman's presence is more desired than a man's. women are better suited for the jobs of obstetrician because it does not require much strength. In fact, strength could prove to be deleterious because the job of an obstetrician requires carefully handling the baby. if, during delivery, the infant is pulled with greater than optimal force, then it could have some fatal effects on him or her. Thus, there are some tasks or jobs where a woman is preferred to a man.
some would argue that people can be trained to do any job in any field hence being a man or a woman does not make much of a difference. but, I argue that you can train people, not their physical traits. even if you train a man to apply less force, you cannot take away his strength, even if you train a woman to be a labour, you cannot give enough strength to her that she would need in emergency. To conclude, I would like to say that there are some tasks and jobs that are not equally suited for men and women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56136820926 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40804136314 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0769230769 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1923076923 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237213894058 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748925971941 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477853802798 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160468253198 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472285076236 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.