Men and women, because of their inherent physical
differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which
you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and
supporting your position, be sure to address the most
compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to
challenge your position.
Male and female human body seem to have some noteworthy physical differences. Here physical differences does not necessarily indicate only the external differences that can be seen, rather even more significant differences in the internal organs exists. The premise states that, due to the inherent physical differences, men and women are not equally suited for many tasks. I agree to the statement for reasons.
Firstly, women are the carrier of the future generation. They carry the babies in their womb. With time, due to modernization pollution has been increased rapidly. Again, food adulteration is a common phenomenon in our society. Research has evinced that productivity rate is directly affected by these factors and recently the rate of productivity has decreased to a serious level. Along with these factors, heavy works including heavy weight lifting may contribute as a catalyst to cause hindrance in further pregnancy, or may result in miscarriage even. So it is obvious now, that it is not suitable for women to perform heavy weight lifting jobs.
Additionally, we can not overlook the external physical differences as well which makes either gender attractive to each other. Generally most women are physically weaker than the men and does not have the proper defense lessons to protect themselves in serious situations where they are attempted to be exploited by other men. Hence, asks involving requirement of late night shifts are not properly suited for women as there lies more risk of being exploited by the male coworkers. A recent survey has presented a statistics where it is shown that approximately 90% women have faced sexual harassment by the male coworkers in night shift.
Many may argue that, if we give moral lessons to our children and teach basic defense lessons to our girls, it will not be a problem for women to engage in any jobs requiring male-female coworkers cooperation. But yet, if it was so, by now there would be no report of rape cases by coworkers. From the discussion over, it can be concluded that for the possessed physical differences, men and women are not suited for many tasks.
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take.In developing and supporting you 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 62
- Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reas 50
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ution has been increased rapidly. Again, food adulteration is a common phenomenon...
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...n our society. Research has evinced that productivity rate is directly affected b...
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...s directly affected by these factors and recently the rate of productivity has de...
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Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...th these factors, heavy works including heavy weight lifting may contribute as a catalyst to...
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Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...it is not suitable for women to perform heavy weight lifting jobs. Additionally, we can...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...the male coworkers in night shift. Many may argue that, if we give moral lessons to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13105413105 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80781336241 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569800569801 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5622402467 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244148705666 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748756561017 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854239006499 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145965769805 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601396728796 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.