Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
As of now, where the world stands ,Gender Equality has become a prime goal for all the individuals.The topic is about the work preferences and kind of tasks that a women cannot do because of an inherent physical difference which is not the truthful. Women are today not only more qualified than men in some fields but also more capable of doing a particular task efficiently. So discriminating pr prioritizing a men for a job or a task just by the sole reason of gender is quite unsuitable.
Primarily, yes, there are differences in the physical structure of men and women but there seems to be no field that women have left to explore or even surpass a men. For example, there are various sports which were wrongly justified to be for men only, however women have excelled more in the same sport than men.To be precise, wrestling was seen to be a sport of men but it has shown that now women have also taken the sport with great enthusiasm and quality. Speaking about corporate world , there is no place for which women can be considered less qualified by gender.
However, there are some tasks that a women lacks but not overshadowed is the task of labor work.There are countries who have had their prime minister or president to be a women and during her reign the country developed more than under a reign of a male prime minister or president. Also, in the field of science and technology it is seen that many women are at the higher jobs than men and guide the men.A men needs to buck up their belts to give competition to the women of this generation who tend to be more impressive in most of the fields.
Last but not the least, as women were not allowed to work in past centuries, they have come up a long way to earn their place in the world and not just to be sidelined on the basis of gender.There are some tasks which are performed better than women but still it would be fallacious to believe that it is just because of the inherent physical differences ,NO that would be purely based on the qualification and ability of a person.
Lastly , there are various factors to be considered while assigning a task to a person.These factors should be purely based on the requirements for the particular job irrespective of the gender of the person or the employee. If that was the case , then the world would have never seen such great women like Mother Teresa, Sarojini Naidu and many more.So there should not be any gender inequality on the basis of inherent differences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, kind of, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.546875 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60679016962 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457589285714 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3031459634 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.181818182 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.7272727273 23.4991977007 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234427667047 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101924827824 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412170259755 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140045952396 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358624663104 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.