Men and Women categorized as humans has incredible inbuilt talents that are often exhibited in enormous sectors around the world. However, the morphology of the gender plays a key role in determining the efficacy of the work done. Though we are able to identify women playing a major part in most of the platforms worldwide, there are certain hurdles that restrains them from hazardous tasks. There are considerable number of tasks where men works eminently than women.
Women are prone to change in the physique and often attacked with hormonal imbalance. Especially when Women give birth, they undergo post portem depression. There is a surge in their hormonal imbalance. Therefore there is a declination in their energy levels which restricts them from getting involved in complex tasks. For example, a woman cannot easily climb oil rigs situated offshore. It requires lot of effort physically which is easily attainable by men. Similarly, men are involved in intense and strenuous construction jobs which is not achievable by women. Men are comparatively strong in physique than women. Although they undergo certain changes in adulthood, it is merely a negligible change to that of a transformation woman undergo.
Apart from the jobs that involve physical hardships, women nowadays excel in all vital fields that involve mental challenges. We have women scientists, athletes, pilots, astronauts, community helpers, leaders, politicians etc. They endure mercurial situations, face major adaptive conditions, build family, rear children and finally succeed in having a very constructive career path.
To recapitulate, variations in morphology is considered to affect the career opportunities for women. In future, there may be a change in the preferences and with advanced medical treatments for general imbalance in body, women are likely to acquire strength to handle all kind of tasks equal to men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...is a surge in their hormonal imbalance. Therefore there is a declination in their energy ...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ect the career opportunities for women. In future, there may be a change in the preferenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, similarly, therefore, apart from, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4527027027 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8912524552 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0384425919 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180496048808 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566406602876 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441054488285 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103166935146 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050794676701 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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