Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Humans beings have been classified as men and women depending upon their physical differences and based upon these differences they are intended to do different jobs. These differences serve as an obstruction to women and prevent them from doing certain tasks like men. Moreover, they are also the reason for making the women more delicate and emotional when compared to men. In earlier days, it was believed that women were not supposed to work in the fields like men and so they were suppressed by men. In today's world there is nothing that a woman can't achieve. In fact, now-a-days women are also trying to do the tasks which were thought to be limited only to men.
Firstly, let us consider the example of a woman named SUDHA MURTHY. She was the only one female student in her department during the time she was studying. She was studying in the Indian Institute of Science located in Banglore. One day she saw the letter of the company named TATA inviting the students to join them and at the end of the letter it was mentioned that only male students have to apply. This was unbearable for her and she wrote a letter to the managing director opposing it. She also challenged him that she could do what other men could. The managing director was shocked but later on invited her and looking at her skills he offered her the job. She was the first women to get appointed in the field work. In spite of the physical differences she was offered a job which was earlier thought to be intended only for men.
Secondly. let us consider the example of the famous astronaut, Kalpana Chawla, who went into the outer space. She was the first Indian woman to become an astronaut. She was one among those who believed that if a man could do then why can't she and finally she proved that a women can also be an astronaut. Even though being a women she was suitable for the task which was earlier believed to be intended only for men.
On the contrary, there are a few tasks which being a women, is not intended to do. The delicate nature of a women prohibits her to do certain tasks and the society too prohibits them from doing it. The woman's body is sensitive to certain things. Men are capable of developing muscles but women cannot because their physical body is not supportive in that matter. Women are also not as strong as men are due to their body complexities.
Therefore, there are certain tasks which are intended only for women and there are tasks which are intended only for men, but the number is only a few. On the brighter side there are a lot of tasks in which men and women can compete with each other in spite of their physical differences. In this modern world both men and women are considered equally capable of doing all the tasks.
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hy cant she and finally she proved that a women can also be an astronaut. Even though b...
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
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Suggestion: a woman; women
...rary, there are a few tasks which being a women, is not intended to do. The delicate na...
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'in spite of', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200371057514 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.205936920223 0.157235817809 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0742115027829 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575139146568 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0705009276438 0.0444667217837 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107606679035 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0779220779221 0.0406280797675 192% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.30950297683 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333951762523 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100185528757 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111317254174 0.0249443105267 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222634508349 0.0148568991511 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2758.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 500.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.516 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.068 0.132149295362 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30950297683 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.3159418153 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8571428571 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6667806894 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.2571428571 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.15555555556 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289949981647 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138633256071 0.123202303941 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0910595820187 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.513583920669 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153234327426 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109780026484 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982830646472 0.0892212321368 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375048896625 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1284082863 0.0692045440612 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226688484872 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123715399869 0.0653680567796 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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