Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
It is obvious that, for a nation to grow socially, economically and politically the role of both men and women is equally important. Today we see, women are indulging in lots of workforces that were previously thought to be belonging only to men. However, there is some differences between men and women and the physical differences are the most prominent. The prompt suggests that because of physical difference they are not all suited to the same task. However, I mostly disagree with this statement for two reasons and do concede that in some very extreme cases this could be true.
First of all, the main difference in the corporeal structure of men and women is the physical strength to do something, and it is believed that men are naturally stronger than women. But, this is not the case for all. Physical strength is not limited at all. We have seen that people going to the gym and building their physic very strongly. By doing so anyone can surpass their natural strength by working hard at the gym. And this goes for both men and women. And because of that it is obvious that some women (who go to the gym) might be more physically powerful than some men (who spend their time in bed whole day). And this can rule out the fact that physical power can make men more suitable to a task than women.
Secondly, resilience is more important in working at achieving a goal. And with proper motivation and the mentality to be persistent in working toward that goal makes a person ultimately succeeded. And this goes for men and women equally. For instance, we all know how difficult and challenging it is to climb the highest mountain on earth, the mount averest. And with professional training you also need to have that doggy attitude that makes you work relentlessly and meticulously toward the top of the world. In that task physical difference can not inhibit men or women. So, the mental strength can easily overcome the physical inability to perform a task.
Although in some cases though the physical differences get the best of us. And in the physical ability not being same there are sports even that are conducted between men and women separately. It wouldn't be fair to pose man and woman against each other.
To conclude, there is some basic differences between male and female but that is really minute and can be easily overcome by hard work, passion, resiliency and positive attitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52576743462 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2479453807 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395041511989 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124323434064 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103974405744 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207681555943 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114865858578 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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