Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Are men and women really equally suited for all possible tasks? While this has been a huge topic of contention for many decades, I believe that the capabilities of both the sexes go hand in hand, as long as minor nuances of physical of strength are not taken into account.
If we inspect the details of human body construction closely, biology proves that the body of a man is supposed to be more heavily built with a higher composition of muscle mass than that of a woman. According to statistics, the average weight and height of men are relatively more than that of women too. However, these disparities do not impact most of the tasks we as human beings perform on a daily basis.
Deep diving into diverse domains in today's world like entrepreneurship, theatre, technology or science, innumerable women have proved to be on par with men with their accomplishments. Being the chief technology officer of the internet giant Facebook, Sheryl Sandberg has depicted exceptional leadership and strategic qualities to shape the journey of the company, whereas Kalpana Chawala, the first Indian woman to travel to spaces has inspired many across the globe. Marie Curie, the woman who devoted her life to researching elements and also discovering a radioactive element Curium is a common name in science textbooks today. Beyonce is the queen in the world of entertainment and Simone Biles has become a cherished personality all across due to her remarkable performance in the Olympics.
Having said that, many would argue that physically, the body of a woman is meant to nurture and provide care, while that of a man is designed to work for long hours and toil in the fields. Additionally, people add that that traits also engender the difference in emotional characteristics, of women being more emotional and sentimental and men being more rough and tough. These biases are also inadvertently portrayed by the movies, advertisements, and books today. The inheritance of these traits are correlated to the hormones which trigger effects like these. It is said that having more oestrogen, women are generally more empathetic towards everyone, while this fallacy can easily be debunked by illustrating examples of single fathers who manage their children and take care of work and their homes with equal skills.
Ultimately, as the bulk of the evidence states that the male and the female gender are equally adept to perform most of the tasks. The design of both is the difference, but in no way do these physical differences make one gender more capable than the other. They have their own innate strengths and weaknesses, but today's world proves that every task and chore is achievable by both the genders equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12080536913 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94041101654 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.778672989 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.076923077 118.986275619 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3846153846 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165342651229 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575946091837 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483077299298 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869265090331 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336196098333 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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