Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The above statement emphasizes on the fact that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their physical differences . I believe that the above statement is false as women have done extremely well in various fields in recent years and are tantamount with men in many fields.
Firstly, I believe that the physical differences between men and women won't matter much when both have the will and deteremination to achieve a goal. Women in recent years have given tough competiiton and have also emerged on top position in various competitive tasks.For example, a women from South India has achieved a feat which barely some men will be able to achieve it. She has climbed all the seven top peaks of every continent,which also includes Mount Everest,highest summit of the world, with immense determination and dedication. Climbing a moutain requires great will and patience and along with that it also requires good physical posture.Therefore physical differences doesn't hinder women from achieving what they want if they have enough motivation and will to do it.
Secondly, as the society has evolved the significance to women has increased and also women are given equal opportunity to vanish the differences between men and women which used to happen in ancient times. Sports require diligence and hardwork along with sportsmanship.It is of utmost importance for a sportsperson to be arduous. Sports has also evolved as we see that there are women cricket,football,long-tennis,etc. competitions arranged. For example,Indian women's team captain Mithali Raj has scored more than 8000 runs in cricket.This feat is not achieved by many male cricketers as well.This is an inspiration set to many youngsters that one can achieve anything if he/she is willing to face the challenges to reach the peak of success.
It is true that there are physical differences between men and women but that is not the only factor ny which we can say they aren't equally suitrd for every task. As seen from the above real life exaamples, great will,dedication and determination also matters along with physical strength. That is why one should always buttress the equality of male and female for a better and brighter future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15745856354 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26159397835 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.121159108 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.615384615 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223777036077 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855301367351 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620961486916 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155802035264 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303126306054 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.