The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The new generation are so creative that they have a significant influence to the contemporary culture. However, because of this very creativity, the culture produced by these young people is prone to change and thus highly mercurial. In addition, a custom as a whole should incorporate the culture of all ages, not only the culture of the youth.
Admittedly, the trend of the young reflects the present culture in a society and is a epitome of how the society is changing. Since the new generation change very quickly and are able to keep up with the change, looking to the trends of the youth may provide insight into the nation's culture. K-pop for example, is regarded as the representative culture of Korea in many foreign countries because many people are attracted to the catchy melody and performances of Korean idols. Since many Koreans are influenced by these idols, young or old, understanding K-pop will help you to understand the overall Korean culture.
Nevertheless, the new generation are very capricious, and they are very sensitive to change. Consequently, their creation of a new customs and behaviors are sometimes ephemeral and as new culture comes to existence, others fade away into the oblivion. Foreigners and even sometimes people in the nation themselves have trouble keeping up with this change. For instance, in K-pop except for some prominent singer groups, most groups perform one or two stages after their debut and disassemble due to the massive competition in the K-pop market. Hence, it would be difficult to appraise one's culture by only looking into the culture of the young.
Furthermore, a culture is consisted of all generations not only the young. Overlooking the culture of the old would be like looking a single facet of a diamond. In addition, compared to the temporary nature of the youth culture, the old culture is more durable to change and thus by being passed down to following generations, becomes a core part of a nation's customs. All in all, to truly understand the culture of a country, one should understand how all these generations interact with each other to make a colorful harmony.
In conclusion, even though the young generate new styles and ideas on a daily basis, it would be hasty to conclude that these innovations represent a nation's culture. Rather, to get a good grasp on it, one should try to look at the complete picture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the present culture in a society and is a epitome of how the society is changing....
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, even so, except for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79900714168 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497512437811 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4379102569 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121284456353 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387695240029 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251712909086 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672699146948 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324410970579 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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