In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your
position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and
explain how these considerations shape your position.
If one can say him or her professional then he/she should profound in whichever fields he involved with. The prompt recommends that in most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this suggestion and argue that knowledge is crucial for any profession for the following reasons.
To begin with, in any academic field and professional knowledge is the most important aspect of the person able to work continuously without any interruptions. if one does not have the corresponding knowledge of their fields then it is not possible to even encounter simple problems faced by them. for instance, if the computer engineering student is luckily selected by the MNC company for job profile of an assistance software engineer and that student does not know the fundamentals of computer science then he will face any problems in solving basic challenges and will not even think of any difficult task which requires out of the box imagination. The above example illustrates that skillset is very essential in any profession.
Furthermore, gaining knowledge will never be detrimental to anybody it will always help people in some or the other way. yes, gaining knowledge or in other words obtaining knowledge is a long procedure however, at the end person will be profound in a particular field. Consequently, if someone is on a continuous path to gain knowledge there is a subsequent increase in the imagination of the person. For instance, the great Swami Vivekanand had got his powerfull imagination because he has acquired a plethora of knowledge and also he meditates to gain knowledge and increase the imagination. This phenomenon fails the assertion made by the statement.
At some point, imagination plays a very important role in most of the professions and it could help to tackle the critical situations, in which alone knowledge can't work. However, to become successful in any profession and remain constant in that position skillset or knowledge in their respective fields is very crucial. And the prompt assertion does not hold the water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
If one can say him or her professional then he/she sho...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...continuously without any interruptions. if one does not have the corresponding kno...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...continuously without any interruptions. if one does not have the corresponding kno...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ncounter simple problems faced by them. for instance, if the computer engineering s...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kily selected by the MNC company for job profile of an assistance software engine...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
...s help people in some or the other way. yes, gaining knowledge or in other words ob...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...al situations, in which alone knowledge cant work. However, to become successful in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19825072886 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0173701754 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2331327232 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136283435627 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538091128182 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799236181472 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102497939439 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713203579504 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.