A national curriculum for all children up to college, instead of having different region to choose their own curriculum may be agreeable by many. I agree with the statement for common core subject throughout nation, but at the same time there should be some freedom given to the state to include cosmopolitan of their respective states.
Firstly, when any peer will graduate from his/her high school, they will be having same knowledge as of around the country. If all the students passing will be at same level when graduating, it will make easy for colleges to design a nonamorphous and diverse curriculum. This can help to decrease the mercurial fluctuation in an individual peer.
Secondly, there will be no discrimination amongst the students, whether any individual state was having an easy curriculum or comparatively more arduous curricula. Therefore, any student graduating from any part of country will be not discriminated against whether the student from any particular state has passed from easy curricula or industrious curricula.
Although, there is a possibility of dogmatic behavior by the federal committee formed for structuring nation wide curriculum. There might be possibility of discrimination amongst the states, and so some of the important movements which helped the country to become more prosperous can be neglected. Another possibility might be, the student's knowledge would become parochial and less ambiguous.
To conclude above arguments on whether a nation should have same curriculum along the country or not, can be subject to person to person. But there are more pros in having a nationwide same curriculum. Same curriculum, in my view, balance out the discrimination and rest can be left on states or any community.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...ederal committee formed for structuring nation wide curriculum. There might be possibility ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...scrimination amongst the states, and so some of the important movements which helped the co...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...cted. Another possibility might be, the students knowledge would become parochial and le...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to person'.
Suggestion: to person
...long the country or not, can be subject to person to person. But there are more pros in having a na...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can be left on states or any community.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35611510791 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02828350873 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.66516663 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13638814091 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597845008181 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397845132853 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863468849917 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390170316856 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...ederal committee formed for structuring nation wide curriculum. There might be possibility ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...scrimination amongst the states, and so some of the important movements which helped the co...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...cted. Another possibility might be, the students knowledge would become parochial and le...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to person'.
Suggestion: to person
...long the country or not, can be subject to person to person. But there are more pros in having a na...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can be left on states or any community.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35611510791 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02828350873 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.66516663 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13638814091 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597845008181 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397845132853 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863468849917 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390170316856 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.