A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
To survive as a human being, education is as important as other life essentials such as food, clothes and a roof on our head. Education is what defines the progress of nation and allows people to achieve their goals in life. When a nation standardize a national curriculum for primary education, the students can learn in well-structured manner which further allows them to choose their right path of career.
A major advantage of following a national curriculum for primary education is that it contributes to the overall growth of students. Students when following a well-planned curriculum during their school can learn all the essential subjects such as science, math, history which builds their foundation in education on the basis of which they can choose their future path to studies. For example, if a student is has knowledge of fundamentals of science and maths, and he/she is interested in scientific research, it can help him to choose a right course for college studies. Also, other subjects learned such as Geography or Biology would also add up to their general knowledge which is equally important in various life events. For instance, if some student is studying Biology in school, and is a teenager, it will help him/her to understand different aspect of human body and to learn about the changes in body that happen during puberty.
Furthermore, having a fundamental knowledge of different subjects can help students to determine their strengths and weaknesses, which is crucial to select a suitable major for college. Suppose a student is good is arts but math is not his strength then it would be fruitful for him to choose Arts degree in college in which he can perform well rather than choosing something in which they are performing poorly.
When their is one curriculum accepted across the nation, it is fairly manageable for government to gather required data about performance of student and to introduce future educational plans to improve any fault. So, if the current results are not satisfactory, the government can improve the curriculum to yield better results which contributes to the overall growth of students.
In sum, well-planned national curriculum can help students to learned in structured environment to get strengthened their understanding of different educational fields and to identify their field of interest for their undergraduate studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23636363636 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92165653527 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483116883117 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2155826771 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.076923077 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193236095855 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812121417231 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431453573834 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12257788306 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235017385089 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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