A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take.In developing and supporting your position,describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I totally agree with the statement given.A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Every one in the nation should be treated as equals.In my opinion, everyone in the nation should be given equal rights of education,that goes with the school curriculum too.The different curriculums accepted throughout the nation, trains or teaches children in disparate ways.For example,the different subjects,the way of testing the student's skills ,everything differs.So the student's get themselves used to a particular way of learning.
Every student in the nation are thus provided with the same opportunity to choose what course they would like to pursue in their college.They have an idea of the wide range of courses available.This is possible only if the entire nation follows the same curriculum.
If every school follows different curriculums,they might follow different subjects in their curriculum.This leads to a paucity of options to the students.If the curriculum is made common,then the national board may devise a curriculum in which the basics of all majors are covered ,giving the students a wide range of opportunities.
Almost every college follows the same of way of testing student's skills ,whereas this is not the same in the case of schools .Every school belonging to a different curriculum follows a different way of testing.So,the students get adapted to a particular way of testing.Therefore ,when students from different curriculums join the same college,the way of testing in that college may be familiar to a particular student and not to the others.This is like being biased to a particular group of students.
Nonetheless following the same curriculum treats everyone evenhandedly,no one is favored and everyone are at the same line.
However,the students out of their own interest can learn different courses off campus.This allows them to be specialized in a particular cousrse or skill.
Thus all students of a nation should follow a common national curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.534375 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21677579019 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4875 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.515730811 60.3974514979 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.375 118.986275619 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 23.4991977007 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.21951772744 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283258224645 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175927607826 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139835939376 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175927607826 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139835939376 0.0667264976115 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 14.1392134831 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 48.8420337079 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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