A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Whether to standardize the national curriculum or not is a long lasting debate among educators. The defenders of common and standardized national curriculum, argues that there is a minimum amount of knowledge on each topic that all citizens must acquire. However they dont realize that they forgo specialization to reach that minima, personal ambitions and interests of individuals and the governments ability to provide sufficient resources to everyone. Thus, considering both the harm given to indivuduals and the resource scarcity I have to disagree with this recommendation.
First of all, each children is born with different abilities and interest that later will be affect their academic and professional path. School is the first place where personal tendencies and interests are realized. Therefore, to encourage to learn and succeed, such differences should be taken in to account rather than forcing them to study courses they are totally apathetic to. Along with wasting their time such a method can even create a detest towards school among youth.
Secondly, It is impossible to provide the same facilities to each school in the country. Quality education requires computers, a library with a variety of books and other materials. Unless the government can provide all of this to everyone there will be a dicrepancy. A school in rural area will have no access to sophisticated tools that a student living in metropolitan area have. While keeping them responsible for the same material is unfair, believing the sufficiency of government in providing such tools is unrealistic. Therefore, a healthy and effective curriculum should be designed by teachers and schools that will make the best use of available resources.
To conclude, a standardized national curriculum along with its impossibility of realization would hinder specialization of children in their interested area. Thereby, far from reaching its goals of providing a base knowledge to everyone the proposal would harm educational system as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...h topic that all citizens must acquire. However they dont realize that they forgo speci...
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Suggestion: don't
...all citizens must acquire. However they dont realize that they forgo specialization ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ns and interests of individuals and the governments ability to provide sufficient resources...
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Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...s are realized. Therefore, to encourage to learn and succeed, such differences should be...
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...heir time such a method can even create a detest towards school among youth. Secondl...
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Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a variety of books and other materials. Unless the government can provide all of this ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'base knowledge'.
Suggestion: base knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06767540674 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5270413249 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156658999496 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489077150311 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303424776935 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927119431573 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023600259591 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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