A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The issue is whether or not a country should entail all of its pupils to learn the same national course until they enter college. I strongly concur a nation should teach to all of its students the same national course, and behind this agreement my following reasons mentioned below:
Firstly, Primary-school and High-school is based of the folk for their career. This Means From Standard 1-12 is vital part of people life for make a lucrative career. Without have High-School knowledge they can't go further in education field. Every person have equal rights, So Nation should teach equal Education for its students.
Secondly, For College Admission, they need cut-off marks for select limited student for particular college. So If nation give equal education to its pupils than they have equal trivial of exam, and its best way for in-take of college. For Instance, In Some High-school teach easy courses, and their exam paper also may be quick easy. On other hand, In Some High-school Teach Tough courses like a CBSE-School, and their paper is toughest rather than other school. So, country cannot predict accurate result of overall performance of student.
Meanwhile, CBSE-School have higher priority for selected in college rather than other high-school. Because their students ample prowess from than other school. So, it can't tough to take decision for college admission, But it better to give equal education to students. So, everyone has equal right for make their lucrative career.
In the whole, The original statement is veracity. A country should entail its students to educate the same national curriculum until they intake in college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue is whether or not a country should entail all of its pupi...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Without have High-School knowledge they cant go further in education field. Every pe...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... college rather than other high-school. Because their students ample prowess from than ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... prowess from than other school. So, it cant tough to take decision for college admi...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
... prowess from than other school. So, it cant tough to take decision for college admi...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... decision for college admission, But it better to give equal education to students. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24812030075 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54237644576 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4901626142 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288617756858 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113889297149 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166826240962 0.0758088955206 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242369808037 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207598773076 0.0667264976115 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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