Same national curriculum before entering the college is good for all students. everyone in the nation rich or poor have access to common base. They can learn basic s of everything. every student will be educated with the same curriculum. There will be no diifferenciation. There will be cometition between students. Every student will get similar opportunity in education. It will help in country growth. There is no biaseness. They will study hard to achieve their goal.
There is a good example developing and poor countries. Education is accessible to most likely everybody in developing countries . Government is providing core curriculum for all students. While In poor countries education is not accessible for poor people. They cnnot go to school. They have to work in factories for their parents. They have to earn money for food, cloth. This doesn't help the nation in growing economically. Developing nations are growing economically with education. An educated person will think about employment differntly.
There is many good things about same national curriculum. There is other example of same national curriculum is while moving from one place to other place with parents due to good job oppotumities of their parents. Student can suffer in their studies if there is not same curriculum. Before entering the college is base for every child.
There could be also few cons of same curriculum. Sometimes students get pressurised with their parents , if they don't like the papers. They fill difficult in that paper. But ,It will be mandatory for them to study all papers. There will be no choices for them to pick there faviourate course work. They just get frutrated in studies befor the college. They just hate their studies. They don't gat motivation to study.
As mentioned in issue A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college. It will help everybody in the nation in getting equality of rights for education. It will help a nation in growing potentiallt, economically. This is really a good thing for any nation.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10755813953 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76034560068 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470930232558 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 23.0359550562 39% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3264759004 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.8055555556 118.986275619 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.55555555556 23.4991977007 41% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.13888888889 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435644103775 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106932211477 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152416021768 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283178183762 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155255269315 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 11.2143820225 50% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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