A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. Supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be preferential and explain how these examples shape your position.
The author suggests that all the students of a nation should study the national curriculum until they enter college. I disagree with this because all the students are not of same caliber. further, since they will study different curriculum in college, the students should start preparing from at The early stage.
First, All at The students do not have same, interest. s some are interested in mathematics, some are in History. the if they study same, curriculum, at The students by will not BE of Able to UTILIZE Their Full potential. at The student the WHO is More interested in mathematics, should study a curriculum that emphasizes on mathematics. if he is forced to study a curriculum that doesn't have any mathematics, he may lose interest in study.
Second, the students will study different curriculum in college. So, the early stage of study should prepare for their college curriculum. if a student gets himself admitted into an engineering college, but doesn't have a good background in mathematics, he will suffer a lot. similar a student of medical college should have a elementary knowledge on biology. this may not be possible if all the students study same curriculum before college.
One may argue that if the students study same curriculum before college, it will be easy to Teach them. since all the teachers are not same, it is not true.
In conclusion, a nation should not require all students to study the same national curriculum. since each student has different interest and different caliber, their curriculum should also be different until they enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77753465887 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429657794677 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6104800231 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4705882353 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321033272249 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141722914909 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104877718938 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231262115285 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950090217116 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.