A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. Supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be preferential and explain how these examples shape your position.
should the students need to study the same national curriculum before they go to college? since the community culture and education quality differs from places to places, it is untenable to require all students to study the same national curriculum in their early age. however, the basic knowledge curriculum is beneficial to most of people. therefore, even I am not agree with the author's position, there is some merits in the argument.
Nobody would dispute that there is localize culture which is not and may not be possible for other people from other places to understand. For example, for people who do have religion for the Jesus would like to join the related schools to have further study on their own relegion. however, to promagulate this kind of relegion curriculum or to abondon it in national wise would have deterimental to both groups of people. therefore, for community who has special needs, it is unwise to enforce a national curriculum to those group.
Besides, diverse cultures are not only one localize factors, the different educations level between different places is also essential when the policy makers try to implement the same curriculum to the whole nation. it is undisputed fact that the education resources are unbalance. The places with more education resources would like to have more deep learning of the subjects, or they can provide better learning environment for their students, which is impossible for the places with fewer resources. To maximize the education results, the policy makers should let the local education institution to determine what the basic curriculum is.
On the other hand, since nowadays human culture is based on some foundamental understanding of society and science, the basice curriculum is usually identical to cultivate a productive member of society. To illustrate, one need to look no further than the basic mathematic education. The basic math is the foundation for current science development, nobody can become well informed with basic mathematic knowledge. other than their national offical language is also critical for people to become productive members of society. And, the basic curriculum also can provides college with a standard where the students' level is, which curriculum is stuiable for the students. Without the basic curriculum education, the college cannot well filter the desirable candidates. In my view, policy makers can implement the same basic curriculm in national wise to ensure the quality of foundamental education quality.
In conclusion, to implement the same curriculum, policy makers should consider the localize community culture and the diverse education level between different places. however, for the basic curriculum is appropriate to implement the policy in national wise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38215102975 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77063506903 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45766590389 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4804219462 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224358712939 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772391289664 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604814375969 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146907367455 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055181786222 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.