A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Having a good education system is a pivotal matter to any country and there is some important decisions to make about the education system. Making decision about curriculum that student have to study is one of the important issues in the education system. I strongly agree with the assumption because of 3 reason.
First of all, because student are going to enter college after school years, it could be better to have same curriculum in order to evaluate students in a better and exact way. imagine this plausible situation that 200 students want to enter some specific college but because of the difference of curriculum that they studied, the college could not decide between them.
Secondly, learning same curriculum for all students in a country means that you are treating people with equality and you do not make difference between them. As a moral aspect this could be considered as a merit of that education system.
Third of all, in the case of having the same curriculum, the role of the teacher in learning process diminishes and students could evaluate their situation without depending on their teacher. They could work on their weak spot in a different ways learning from books...
Although some people believed that it could be better to have different aproach in teachin material but I think having same aprroach could be benefial for a country in a long prospective.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 33
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- TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imagine
...ate students in a better and exact way. imagine this plausible situation that 200 stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99570815451 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57401979898 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502145922747 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2492639539 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160979493815 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716261828915 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514543237174 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948802894437 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477353960276 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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