A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Every individual is born with a talent.It will be injustic to go through same curriculum without working on their talent and make it as a career. If one studies same subjects, they will not be able to identify their interest and may not perform well in college. So according to my perspective, A nation should not require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college.
Not everyone is good at same thing. Some are good at music, some at arts and sketches and some at mathematics. There should be general subjects which can be common for all until they enter college like history, english and basics of mathematics. There can be a student who is exceptionally good at physics chemistry and mathematics and there can be another student to whom these would be really not understandable but he might be good at accounts and commerce. So he must be given option to study basics of science and study accounts in depth by giving oppurtuniuty of choosing subjects of his interest. This will result in building expertise in his field from his school days itself.
If every student study same curriculum until they start college, they might not be able to discover their inner talent.Once they pass out from high school, it will be difficult for them to identify which course they would like to opt for college and build their career. For instance one student ends up taking a wrong discison.and instead of taking engineering as his course in college he takes commerce. It may be a shock for him after he studies commerece in depth and may not be able to cope-up with the syllabus. He might hardly understasnd anything at all. This would lead him into depression. He will not be able to achieve his dreams. By hooks and crooks, even if he survive by studying very hard, he will be just a mediocar student, just an average.
On the controrary, a student who knew his area of expertise and interest before joining college, he will be able to select best course for himself and perform far better in his carrer. He will be happy with his decisons and would be loving to study and excel in the field of his interest. This will result in better productivity.
Hence, i would disagree with the fact that a nation should not require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college. However, some basic common subjects can be included for all.
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...emistry and mathematics and there can be another student to whom these would be r...
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...dreams. By hooks and crooks, even if he survive by studying very hard, he will be just ...
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...on subjects can be included for all.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203501094092 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.150984682713 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0722100656455 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503282275711 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0919037199125 0.0444667217837 207% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131291028446 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0262582056893 0.0406280797675 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55622357391 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306345733042 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00437636761488 0.0016655270985 263% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700218818381 0.0997080785238 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0612691466083 0.0249443105267 246% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0109409190372 0.0148568991511 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2415.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 423.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70921985816 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316784869976 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241134751773 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158392434988 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0756501182033 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55622357391 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.48968727796 91% => OK
Word variations: 48.3548782196 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1428571429 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6799716292 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 44.2563323202 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.23134328358 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324721813673 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11020071903 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864727759006 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487077649688 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188533740259 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127648919234 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197034317261 0.0892212321368 221% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300290077231 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11037289369 0.0692045440612 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279203126387 0.275328986314 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186772629097 0.0653680567796 286% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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