Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In this issue the argument is that the nations should pass laws to preserve the reminder of the wilderness in the natural state even if those areas could be changed for economical gain. With the continuous harsh change in the climate and the degrading environment should be enough to agree to this point. The very existence of the human race is threatened by overexertion of the natural resources we uses. And the very life of current generation is suffering the consequences. At the dawn of industrial revolution we did not think of the consequences it going to have on the climate. With more and more development in the technology, with more production, the demand for these almost is on the rise. But where is the line to stop before we dug us into a hole that we cannot get out off? let’s consider the merits of this policy.
If we look at the several Asian countries, like Singapore, Maldives, Bangladesh which are now threatened with the risk of losing land mass due to the rise of sea level. This is the aftermath of the well-known global warming. We can also see the rise in the temperature of the world. Weather patterns are changing and becoming a threat. Various large scale natural calamities are becoming a common matter. This is because of the overuse of the natural resources of the world. From mining for oil and other minerals to cutting down trees for the papers, we are pushing the limit of the ecological harmony. If we see the result of the recent hurricane in Bangladesh, the amount of loss is higher due to the cutting down of the coastal natural mangrove forest. This is a good enough reason for starting to reserve the remaining of the forest intact.
Furthermore, in a report from UN, in the last several decade about 10 million species became extinct from the advance of the technology. It is necessary to meet the current high demand of the daily needs of people. But the cost we are paying directly and indirectly is becoming high and lethal. By disturbing the natural habitat of the animals we are breaking down the chain of ecological order. Hunting for fun, excess use of resources without recycling everything is hurting the climate and we are watching the direct effect in terms of the belligerent pattern of the weather.
However, we can’t deny the all of this was done to accommodate for comfort in the life pf people, for the economic gain of the people. Though that is the case, we can’t also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If people can’t live for whom are going to be these benefits. Now, preserving the wilderness by passing laws might have some loss in the department of economic gain. It might result in loss of employment opportunity, might result in political lash back. But this is a opportunity cost for a better healthy life. What we will lose in terms of economical aspect, we will gain it in terms of a better living condition. We cannot deny the importance of the preserving the nature. The amount of carbon is on the rise, polluted seas and other water bodies are spreading diseases. This is a high time to minimize all these act of hurting the nature.
Thus, it is true that what we are doing is in the sense of betterment of the nation and increasing the living standard of people, we can’t turn a blind eye to the impact on the nature. A lot of harm has already been done on the nature. But it is not too late to start amending it. The first step is to preserve what is left and take necessary steps to omit the current techs that are hurting it. This is going to be and adverse effect on the economic gain. But for the sake of the next generation and a healthy life for the current generation this will be a step in the right direction.
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- TOEFL TPO 43 - Integrated Writing Task 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...verexertion of the natural resources we uses. And the very life of current generatio...
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Line 1, column 788, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let&apos
...into a hole that we cannot get out off? let's consider the merits of this policy. ...
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Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'several decades'.
Suggestion: several decades
...rmore, in a report from UN, in the last several decade about 10 million species became extinct...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... is the case, we can't also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If ...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... is the case, we can't also ignore the the effect of the actions that we take. If ...
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Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ult in political lash back. But this is a opportunity cost for a better healthy l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 105.0 58.6224719101 179% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3082.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 672.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58630952381 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09145979004 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56981423919 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443452380952 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 985.5 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9352661787 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1052631579 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192997736978 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457420747724 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760755059718 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110761416266 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588758034325 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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