The opposite of a correct statement is a false statement. But the
opposite of a profound truth may well be another profound
truth.”
From the beginning of the world, people are following different religions, and belong from culture and societies. So they have different believe about many things like the existence of GOD, is one of the best example I can gave. Every religions follower have different point of view about the existence of God. It is really difficult for people to accept a new theory or a fact because they are following their religion blindly without any prove.
However if look in the history human being, those people who came with a new idea or invention they were all resisted by the society. Like if when someone found the fact the apes the ancestors of mankind. Society doesn’t accept that fact at that time. Another concept of earth is round when someone give that theory , people don’t accept that truth, because they blindly follow their ancestors and religion teaching.
Conversely, by the time society has changed alot. People in this century easily accept new facts and theories, because people started to believe in science and researched taken every of life by scientist. But there are still some questions to be answered, Like the life on other planets. Some Religion follower things there must be people who are living billion of mile away from us. Another question still no one can give what happen after the death?
That’s why some people still don’t believe in scientific theories, they use believe their religious theories. Its really important to learn that sometime there is an another side of truth, It’s the opposite side. Some time it happens in the history the new theories which were given science proved wrong by the passage of time. We can conclude from our contentious debate, It very difficult for people to believe in a new truth as we know why they resist.To make people convince, Someone should have to prove that his new theory in a different manners.
- In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules? 73
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. 67
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 73
- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. 50
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...e and societies. So they have different believe about many things like the existence of...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...f GOD, is one of the best example I can gave. Every religions follower have differen...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'religions'' or 'religion's'?
Suggestion: religions'; religion's
...e of the best example I can gave. Every religions follower have different point of view a...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... religion blindly without any prove. However if look in the history human being, tho...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
... concept of earth is round when someone give that theory , people don't accept ...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h is round when someone give that theory , people don't accept that truth, be...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ngs there must be people who are living billion of mile away from us. Another question ...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a side' or 'another side'.
Suggestion: a side; another side
...portant to learn that sometime there is an another side of truth, It's the opposite side. ...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... a new truth as we know why they resist.To make people convince, Someone should ha...
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Line 7, column 560, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'manner'?
Suggestion: manner
...rove that his new theory in a different manners.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235772357724 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.162601626016 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677506775068 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0352303523035 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0542005420054 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130081300813 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0325203252033 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41731223418 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162601626016 0.030933414821 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135501355014 0.0249443105267 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216802168022 0.0148568991511 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1903.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 320.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.946875 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26875 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1625 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115625 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41731223418 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 55.4386447586 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8235294118 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5188381435 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.6985294118 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.58064516129 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217792312936 0.391690518653 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114494804874 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105562333005 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477700433799 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100542275408 0.149214159877 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903278413487 0.161403998019 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596005030895 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276625105952 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0335066007683 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151943989802 0.275328986314 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188779313831 0.0653680567796 29% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.