Real world and the problems associated with it differ from that of imaginative literature. The assumption in the statemnent is that reading such literature like poetry , novels etc will help all the college students to become well - rounded individuals. College students are students in a phase wherein they continuosly learn and try to understand the real world and have come out of the safe school bubble . Their next phase of life demands them to be more responsible , independent and problem solver. All these capabilities are inculcated through real time problem solving and teaching them how to work and properly function in today's date.
In contrast to this, the author believes that imaginative reading material will help to achieve this which does not sound convincing . Imaginative literature is based on unreal, fictional and sometimes does not even makes sense. Imaginative novels and poetry contain imaginative ,unreal characters very different form that of human beings.So they way they act, think and their lives will not prove to be helpful for college students to tackle situations and act.
With all this understanding it is now clear what exactly might help individuals to become well-rounded and what might not.Speaking of mythologies, these stories belong to a very long gone era where things were different than that of now.So students will not be able to use the knowledge it contains in today's world.
However, not all college student desire to become an all-rounder. Some are very specific to their domains and dedicate this age to learn and work in it. Reading might not be something they do more oftenly. Students read all kinds of books with different intentions. For example , to relax, to learn etc and these books belong to various gerne.
Thus it can be concluded that for a college student who desires to become well-rounded should do more than just confinig to reading imaginary iterature and focus more on problems and situations realted to present world to actually achieve his or her goals.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that reading such literature like poetry , novels etc will help all the college st...
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Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... have come out of the safe school bubble . Their next phase of life demands them t...
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Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...life demands them to be more responsible , independent and problem solver. All the...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eve this which does not sound convincing . Imaginative literature is based on unre...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
..., fictional and sometimes does not even makes sense. Imaginative novels and poetry co...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve novels and poetry contain imaginative ,unreal characters very different form th...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ery different form that of human beings.So they way they act, think and their live...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Speaking
... become well-rounded and what might not.Speaking of mythologies, these stories belong t...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t.Speaking of mythologies, these stories belong to a very long gone era where thi...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ng gone era where things were different than that of now.So students will not be abl...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... things were different than that of now.So students will not be able to use the kn...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Reading might not be something they do more oftenly. Students read all kinds of...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s with different intentions. For example , to relax, to learn etc and these books ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d these books belong to various gerne. Thus it can be concluded that for a college ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in contrast, speaking of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13939393939 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72871062555 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0416260274 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332376317056 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107880593009 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862826439606 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17866912547 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354627587482 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that reading such literature like poetry , novels etc will help all the college st...
^^
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... have come out of the safe school bubble . Their next phase of life demands them t...
^^
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...life demands them to be more responsible , independent and problem solver. All the...
^^
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eve this which does not sound convincing . Imaginative literature is based on unre...
^^
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
..., fictional and sometimes does not even makes sense. Imaginative novels and poetry co...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve novels and poetry contain imaginative ,unreal characters very different form th...
^^
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ery different form that of human beings.So they way they act, think and their live...
^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Speaking
... become well-rounded and what might not.Speaking of mythologies, these stories belong t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t.Speaking of mythologies, these stories belong to a very long gone era where thi...
^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ng gone era where things were different than that of now.So students will not be abl...
^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... things were different than that of now.So students will not be able to use the kn...
^^
Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Reading might not be something they do more oftenly. Students read all kinds of...
^^
Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s with different intentions. For example , to relax, to learn etc and these books ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d these books belong to various gerne. Thus it can be concluded that for a college ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in contrast, speaking of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13939393939 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72871062555 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0416260274 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332376317056 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107880593009 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862826439606 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17866912547 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354627587482 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.