Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The business manager may have have been correct for restoring the time devoted to weather and local news, but his statements to support his decision do not suffice.
In his memorandum, the business manager has stated that he has received complaints from viewers concerning the local and weather news. It does not state during which period were these complaints received. There can be a possibility that most of the complaints received for weather news coverage are during a time when there has been a hailstorm or rain probability. Not covering such news at the peak time, might result in complaints by the viewers. Also, there can a possibility that the complaints received for the local news coverage is when a notorious thief has escaped the local prison, and there is a need to know where he has been last spotted.
The received complaints have not been enumerated by the business manager. It can be that the viewer strength might have increased, due to the increased time for national news. Unless the statistics are not known about the increase or decrease in the viewing of the television channel, it cannot be deduced that increasing the time for weather and local news shall increase the viewers.
The business manager says local businesses that used to advertise have canceled their contracts. This can be due to another news channel, increasing its advertisement period or advertising for an amount, much lower than that his television is asking. In such a situation, any business shall want to take advantage of this situation.
The viewers may be interested in watching the local and weather news, but not for a former time period but a little less than that. Restoring the time period to its former amount can decrease the number of viewers.
Thus we can say that these arguments need to be taken into consideration before taking any action. A precipitated decision can lead to a decrease in the viewers and also its rank.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96951219512 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65842470116 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448170731707 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5470257144 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34216285441 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12876132861 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859459985989 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178466208091 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110735991175 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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