people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
The statement repose two different points of view about how critical is the global climate change for individuals living in developed country to reduce energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle. While many people argue about the evidence of global warming, many alarming signs which cannot be ignored incite international actions to promote sustainability in order to mitigate the effect of global warming.
First, many deleterious effects can be a result of global warming on different part of the planet. Even if these effects are not happening now, they will be escalating in the near future. For example, heat waves are increasing every years, and in the near future, this phenomena will be increasing. These excessive changes on the weather are more common at urban areas, where the paving surfaces and buildings present more than greenery. So it is our promise to the next generation, to make our efforts to save the available resources, reduce the energy consumption, and attain sustainable lifestyle.
Moreover, The governments and authorities at different country should develop strategies and actions to provoke sustainable practices. Public involvement cannot be achieved without increasing public awareness about the urgent global changes, which can be mitigated by efficiently with more engagement of people from different part of the world. In other words, global warming should not be exclusively concerning people who live in developed nation, it is a global issue and actions should be taken in all over the world.
In contrary, many conservatives may argue that the actions and strategies which could be take to promote sustainability will waste government's funding, while these funding can be used in more urgent problems or increasing the welfare of the people. This argument is erratic and vague. For example, using solar panels in houses reduce the electrical consumption. While sustainable approaches may seem unproductive, but the future results are economically significant.
In conclusion, global warming is an urgent problem which calls for actions from governments and individuals.
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- urban 66
- There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species. 50
- Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. 75
- In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people. 50
- People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In deve 89
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...ions from governments and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54128440367 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94583522597 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3047930181 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231061934313 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773375965205 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859356391229 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134724977221 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823017457759 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.