As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The statement contends that as the use of technology increases, the humans do not use their skills much to solve the problems they face while they are dependent on technology about solving the problems. This deteriorates their ability to think more about solving the problems. I concede that technology plays a vital role in our day today lives. It helps us completing or projects, plan our schedule, information about everything on internet, easy travelling, fast messaging. It helps completing any work in the least time interval as possible which would consume plenty of time if technology would not have been used.
The chief reason for my disagreement is that when more and more technology is used, the options to solve any problem will increase. I mean to say that if u do not own a vehicle of your own and u want to go somewhere far away from your house then you are going to travel with the other transport facility offered in the area like taxi, bus, auto rickshaw, etc. while if you would not have used technology then travelling would have been very time consuming and full of efforts. This way the thinking ability to solve the problem of the person becomes smarter due to availability of more technology and skills to use those available technologies intelligently.
Again, technology itself is created or invented by human beings only which are the proof of their higher thinking ability to solve the problems which they face due to which they found it necessary to invent something new and adorable for them. For example in ancient ages, people face problem to live in dark so electricity and bulb was invented to make their livelihood easy. In this way people use their mental ability to improve their livelihood.
Further, as the use of technology increases the working ability and efficiency of the people, the outcome is more with less required effort. The easiness makes people work more and earn more. This improves their mental peace and makes them innovative. Advances in engineering, bio- technology, medical science, information technology, etc has made the world a smaller place to reach. Improved health and safety are the problems which are solved.
In the final analysis, I find that technology is very useful and can be used in a wiser way to be beneficial in greater extent. I suggest that it improves the mental ability of the person in some or the other helpful ways if it is taken positively. So, I find the above argument as indefensible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[8]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to complete' or 'complete'.
Suggestion: to complete; complete
...ole in our day today lives. It helps us completing or projects, plan our schedule, informa...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to complete' or 'complete'.
Suggestion: to complete; complete
...sy travelling, fast messaging. It helps completing any work in the least time interval as ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...technology would not have been used. The chief reason for my disagreement is ...
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Suggestion:
...vailable technologies intelligently. Again, technology itself is created or i...
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Suggestion:
...ability to improve their livelihood. Further, as the use of technology increa...
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Suggestion:
...y are the problems which are solved. In the final analysis, I find that techn...
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Suggestion:
...ind the above argument as indefensible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, for example, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89573459716 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66933214718 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516587677725 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1733922778 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296678983925 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928991786846 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105816082778 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15631771844 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640772195462 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.