As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Relying on technology to solve problems will not deteriorate the human ability to think for themselves but in fact, it can increase human ability to think.
It is true that technology has made our life very comfortable, easier and has the ability to solve many problems but it does not mean that we don’t have to think. The technology of our generation cannot reason or think critically, it can only answer trivial and straight forward questions which can be answered by using step by step algorithm. For example technology answer the question “What is the current temperature on the city X?” but it cannot answer the question that requires reasoning and critical thinking like “What is life?” , “How does universe works?”.

Human being a creative and intellectual species do not like repeating the same thing again and again. Our brain always needs some kind of simulation this property makes us always think and try various different things even though the technology is solving our required problem. The main reason why we are relying more and more on technology is that machines can repeat the same thing again and again with very high accuracy and very high speed as compared to human doing the same thing for the same number of times. And the things that we well know about, even are able to invent the machine to do that task, doing it, again and again, will not require any intellectual effort thus relying on the machine to solve this problem will not deteriorate human thinking capacity.

In fact, technology increases our ability to think. New technologies are enabling us to achieve things never possible before like with the help of technology we are able to take pictures of Pluto, able to explore Moon and many more. All these things are making human more and more curious to find out more things about our life and universe thus enabling us to think about things never thought before.

With the development of the technology if we reach a point where Artificial Intelligent is achieved then it may have the potential to deteriorate our thinking ability as it being smart can reason and think critically. But still, lots of problems will evolve like “How do we control these AI things?”, “How do we prevent these things for harming us?” all these problems will require profound creativity and reasoning ability thus forcing humans to think and reason even more.

Therefore, relying on technology to solve our problems will not deteriorate our ability to think but in fact, it can increase our ability.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in fact, kind of, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03738317757 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61735546034 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43691588785 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1185902859 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318362683686 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142813374702 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100538335502 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222065391655 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111967476777 0.0667264976115 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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