With the faster pace of the development of technology, we rely much on the technology to solve our daily tasks regardless of noticing or not. There is a controversial issue among people these days that if the advanced technology renders us the improvement in thinking or otherwise deteriorating it. I agree partly that in some specific cases, the convenience means taking granted of doing something while more general, the technology stimulates us the capacity of critical thinking and makes it possible to explore the more cutting-edge scientific fields.
The threshold idea that the technology actually is the reflection of our minds. Without the outstanding creation and innovation of scientific, the tool we use today is unimaginable and the society will make no progress through an extended period of time. For example, such as the technology of genetic treatment and detection, families of children with birth defects confronts the predicament that the traditional treatment cannot solve the maladies. Thus, some biologists will consider that if the disease will be cured by modifying the genes. Through the profound reflection and painful endeavor, the gene therapy gives suffering families the hope of possessing a normal life. Similarly, the Italian physicist Guglielmo Marconi, who invented the apparatus of wireless telegraphy to transmit the signals through a long distance after full thinking of creating a more efficient method of transferring the information. In a word, it is the human nature that we tend to solve the emergent problems existing in the society or a more convenient way in the established ideology that lead us to an advancement.
Moreover, the technology would help us in further exploration of the knowledge as an indispensable instrument which is able to tackle some obstructions formidable for human being.It is no difficulty to adduce myriad examples to illustrate the argument. Under some extreme conditions such as high temperature of lava, high water pressure under the sea, only the robots can finish the operation which promotes the study of the geology. Additionally, the supercomputer operates so quickly that decrease the waiting time compared to the past. Thus, it is possible to study the quantum theory and the outer space. Since we know that the distance of celestial is too far from us and the speed of calculating of human being is so inefficient that it is unwise to rely on our own thinking capacity. However, the emergency of computer provides us the opportunity to a deeper thinking then lead to a more promising future of scientific research.
Nevertheless, the phenomenon we cannot take risks to ignore is that some reliance on the ready convenience will be taken for granted. The popularity of the calculator in our life relieve our mind and we can obtain the number whenever we want. But it will be detrimental for students especially who are still learning the rule of operation. Furthermore, the easy access of Internet surly benefit the scholars to search a proper article written by others. Obviously, it results many academic scandals such as the actor, Zhai Tianlin, who possessed doctor degree of Peking University, recently be completely debunked that his thesis is an academic plagiarism. From the scandal it is safely to say that the powerful network function reveals the dishonest and laziness of opportunism. They are loath to endeavor and think the topic of their own. To that extend, the technology is the impediment of thinking for themselves.
In a nutshell, to say the technology only contains an passive influence is too over-generalized and unconvincing. We should take other factors into consideration that the technology is the reflection of human thinking and it will boost the further study in some new branch of science，though we cannot deny the disadvantage of a excessive reliance on the technology to achieve some selfish goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...obstructions formidable for human being.It is no difficulty to adduce myriad examp...
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...nity to a deeper thinking then lead to a more promising future of scientific rese...
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...romising future of scientific research. Nevertheless, the phenomenon we cannot t...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks ignoring'.
Suggestion: risks ignoring
...rtheless, the phenomenon we cannot take risks to ignore is that some reliance on the ready conv...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ough we cannot deny the disadvantage of a excessive reliance on the technology to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 629.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24642289348 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00798087137 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0544301764 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531001589825 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1056.6 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4452904377 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1923076923 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188157815619 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464910271187 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374545762492 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106920815364 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360382427082 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 100.480337079 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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