Technology made our life easily and comfortable. With help of technology people can now know about various kind of news and informations within country and outside the country. Thus, people now are more dependent on technology. But I disagree with statement that it deteriorate humans thinking power.
Firstly, technology has help to develop many machine which help the women in their kitchen activities. Such as washing machine, vacuum cleaner, micro oven etc. These machine have made the daily activities easier and less tedious. And also with help of this technology development women are able to get spare time for activities other than household work. They can join office which help to grow their personality and supplicate them with more knowledge about nations, surrounding and world.
Similarly, because of technology development scientist are able to research more about the universe and space. And these information has let the whole world know about the universe and make them curious about it which leads them to scrutinize over this topic. Technology have helped more in education field. With allay of technology students can visualize different facts of science which was impossible for them before. For instance, if a student has chaos about the life cycle of mosquito then he can easily google it and know detail about it with better pictures and videos. And this all are possible only because of technologies.
As every aspects have its own pros and cons, technology also have negative aspects. But, it is not fault of technology rather it is of person who is misusing it. People are involving more of their time on social, students cannot solve simple calculation without calculator. It depends on person how they are utilizing it. Technology are developed to make our painstaking work easy and have more knowledge on every field. So, its our duty to realize it and use technology wisely.
All in all, technology are develop to make our tedious and assiduous work easy but its on people to realize how much should be depend on it.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 66
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun machine seems to be countable; consider using: 'many machines'.
Suggestion: many machines
...Firstly, technology has help to develop many machine which help the women in their kitchen a...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... more about the universe and space. And these information has let the whole world know about the ...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...is of person who is misusing it. People are involving more of their time on social, students ...
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Line 4, column 425, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...have more knowledge on every field. So, its our duty to realize it and use technolo...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...ogy wisely. All in all, technology are develop to make our tedious and assiduous work ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depended'?
Suggestion: depended
...on people to realize how much should be depend on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08284023669 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61144580107 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53550295858 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.502880805 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192758477847 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625943402712 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507857680046 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111043398204 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485759461508 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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