As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
technology has been more and more involving with people`s everyday life; from every morning wake-up tones ring from alarms, to drive cars to work, to the last glimpse of cell phone before sleep at night. technology is from being a “part of people`s life” to “it is people`s life”.
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely be deteriorate. The technology of transportation is improved that made people more and more lazy to walk; the laundry and dish machines render people to resist of touching water for hygiene; computers, calculators and all such technology is unwittingly supplanting human`s active thinking ability.
Although all the setbacks that mentioned are undeniably existed and people blame technology for such negativity; technology is a positive catalyst that could boost people`s creativity instead of deteriorating it; and work for human in chase of greater goods. like Isaac Newton once said, “if I have seen future, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants.” what technology does to human is the same, every new technology is being invented today by is based on standing on the previous innovation created by human.
The first industrial revolution brought steam power to human, and based on new findings, people were able to manufacture the very first train in the world and take people to places one might never thought of going; and based on achievements and evolution of technology of the first industrial revolution, here it comes the second industrial revolution, more and more advanced refinery and mining technology is being introduced. cars are accessible to individual household; train trail grids are penetrating in every corner of the nation; airplanes are truncating the time people spend on traveling. following with second, now it comes the third industrial revolution, following the technology adding tide, people like Bill Gates becomes billionaire and fulfilled the promises that putting computers at everyone`s desk; and “Houston got a situation” with all the rockets and spacecraft sending up in the universe in search of the unknow frontier.
The three sequent industrial revolutions the each successive one is built on the achievements of the previous ones. by human proved that the boosting of technology not only associating with human`s thinking ability in direct proportion, but also spurs human`s thinking abilities to be bigger and bolder.
The bigger and bolder thinking ability is conductive to human not only shown by industrialization, but also on medical areas. Small pots the malign that could easily kill people who is infected, now with chemical and pharmaceutical technology today, it could be cured easily. Gene industrial is being developed to make sure that in the future, human would be more and more securely protected in face of diseases. technology is protecting human`s physical condition as well, in order to be healthy to able to harness the creativity of mind.
now, let’s imagine the world today without technology, human probably would be riding horses for commute even in the winter time without heaters on horses` back and in the summer without AC on donkeys` head. For mid-western civils, it would be taking years to see the sea, probably mid-westerns would not know there is a sea. human are being preyed by animals and being killed by coldness in the winter and hotness in the summer, let along diseases.
Thus, by calling technology deleterious to human`s thinking ability is disrespect to those scientists or astronauts, for us, they are sacrificing enormous time till their hands are raw to make sure the environment we are living is safe and sustainable, and dedicating their lives in search of our new homes; it is disdainful to those chemists and pharmacists, for us, they are immolating themselves in labs probing new drugs and methods that could save millions of lives and making sure our offspring would have no fear when facing formidable diseases that we are scared today. it is discouraging to our next-generation scientists, for us, they are emulating in classrooms and libraries with all their energies and passions to make sure in the future they will come out with new innovations that could better assist human beings.
History has been proving and once again will prove that technology is keeping human thinking ability fresh and stimulating the very bottom nerve of brain to think bigger and bolder in order to come up with ideas that could overpass the previous one and to serve human better. technology was not, is not, and will never be a deleterious force to our human thinking ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 51.0 19.5258426966 261% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 112.0 58.6224719101 191% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4050.0 2235.4752809 181% => OK
No of words: 761.0 442.535393258 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32194480946 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25225936605 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99890532549 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 364.0 215.323595506 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478318002628 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1260.0 704.065955056 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.646523729 60.3974514979 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.090909091 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5909090909 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31818181818 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289848584534 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107585621815 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114088926325 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153734900589 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978114339095 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 181.0 100.480337079 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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