As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We have been surrounded by technology almost ever since the human beings started evaluating. The issue statement prompts that this tendency of relying on technology deteriorates our ability to think for ourselves. I strongly disagree with the statement made and would present three points that support my cause.
Firstly, using technology to solve trivial problems give humans more time to work on issues that help work for a larger cause. The coffee maker machine, the car you travel in, all of these help individuals take out more time. The same can be utilized to brainstorm on how to eradicate terrorism and establish world peace or even search for the source of cancer and it's treatment. Humans are still thinking and evolving while technology just helps create more time for focus topics.
Secondly, brains behing technology are humans too. More we rely of machines to complete our tasks, the more we use our brains. Cars of 1960's were as dumb as lab rats and when humans started using them more frequently for travel and gave up walking, the same humans started working towards enhancing the experience. The cars of 2000's drive themselves, park themselves and take decisions in split seconds where humans would fail to do it. No alien technology dropped to earth for implementing the same, it was people like me and you who brainstormed and created them as how they are.
Third and last point is the enhancement of creativity and ideation approach that humans take as technology advances. When the most trivial tasks and some requiring heavy humans physical efforts are performed by machines, we can focus solely on the most demanding topics that a machine itself can't perform. Example being the stem cell technology where a machine takes care of almost all the tasks but you still need a doctor to eradicate the bad cells from human body. Doctors and scientists are always finding new ways to establish that and we are really close to having the whole process automated which would improve human lives a save a lot too.
Although, someone migh argue that depending a lot of machines and technology will just make us lethargic and deteriorate our thinking capabilities, research studies show that humans are now using over 9% of their brains as compared to 3% used by primitive man. Hence it is even scientifically proved that human brain will keep evolving through the generations as we submerge ourselves more and more into this vast ocean of technology and start thinking in ways no one ever imagined doing earlier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97176470588 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54842756322 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585882352941 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.461189338 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.388888889 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6111111111 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291950381643 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890887633264 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477636303604 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159937454276 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373883311629 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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