Thinking ability, both analytical and reasoning and rational decision-making, has always marked the human species and therefore distinguished human beings from other animals. Accompanying such abilities is the obligation to contemplate actions before carrying them out. When it comes to the adventurous actions we are going to take, humans always strive to predict and know more about the possible consequences of these actions ahead of time and then decided whether take the risky actions or not according to these consequences. Even if the thorough consideration of the possible consequences could decrease the loss of the risky actions, I hold a doubtful view that every risky actions need to be considered its consequences carefully before we take that action, since the results we predict are not always true and humans being also need to consider their emotional needs.
Initiative, which coincides with the comprehensive thought about the consequences of the risky actions. When someone confront with the adventurous or complex actions that he/she need to make a decision, he/she always/constantly expected that he/she can give a sensible judgement and precise prediction of the consequences, thus he/she can reduce the harmful results and possible losses in these actions. With the experience we accumulated in our life, in most cases we are able to perform systematic analyses of the circumstance we encounter and make a rational decisions accordingly. we can make a thorough analysis and prediction about the behaviors in most cases. For examples, a stock investor will do a large mount of investigation and analysis about the stock market, as well as the previous profitable trend of one specific stock. He/she also takes the ability that he/she can afford the possible economic losses into consideration. He/she will not to invest a stock without any consideration and prediction. Thus, considering the possible results of risky investment carefully would be beneficial to decrease the risk results of the investment.
However, we are easily to drop into a stereotypical thinking model that “think” will definitely lead to predictable consequences and such a prediction equals success. Unfortunately, the assumption is not true, since we project all the potential consequences based on the previous experiences and information, which could change because of the rapid development of the world. The previous experiences and information may be overturned by a variety of issues we have never encountered, thus we can not make positive or successful decisions. Even the weather forecast which we based on to decide whether to take umbrella or go outside is not always accurate due to the quickly changes of Earth’s climate. What is more, it is must be time-consuming when we strive to get all the possible consequences by accumulating sufficient information, and in this process, we may lose the opportunity in the process and thus we may lose the chance to success. In the business world, grasping a temporary but seemingly risky opportunity plays a significant role for the businessmen to success, because they know that they may miss the chance to success if they are hesitate to take actions.
Finally, the issue demonstrate the principle that we should always undertake actions consistent with the consequences.we are used to take actions based on the results it may lead. Even though some utilitarian( specially the one who always care the beneficial results) are dedicated to follow this principle, from my perspective, setting this principle as the only one standard in our life would strip away the funny part of our life. As human beings, we also have our emotional needs and pursue what we like. For example, the people love extreme and dangerous sports like skydiving, I believe that they already know the worst consequence of this dangerous sports, but they still enjoy it and just do it because they love it. Sometimes we should not care the results when we facing a choice and we also should listen the voice from our heart and then we may not have any regrets even if we are failed.
In short, while human beings are responsible for careful contemplating of the possible consequences of risky actions, these consequences do not suffice to guarantee the success of the risky actions. Indeed, we should be proud that we human beings can make rational decision and comprehensive analysis, we still need to consider our emotional feeling, another significant feature of human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'confronts'.
Suggestion: confronts
...nces of the risky actions. When someone confront with the adventurous or complex actions...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...complex actions that he/she need to make a decision, he/she always/constantly exp...
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Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... make a rational decisions accordingly. we can make a thorough analysis and predic...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mation may be overturned by a variety of issues we have never encountered, thus w...
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Line 3, column 1166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hesitated'.
Suggestion: hesitated
... miss the chance to success if they are hesitate to take actions. Finally, the issue d...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to taking'.
Suggestion: used to taking
...consistent with the consequences.we are used to take actions based on the results it may lea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an beings can make rational decision and comprehensive analysis, we still need to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in short, as well as, in most cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 33.0505617978 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3800.0 2235.4752809 170% => OK
No of words: 722.0 442.535393258 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18363363724 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06081522908 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445983379501 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1215.9 704.065955056 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0833136679 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.88 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141317118382 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473122647783 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406916264443 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890895748152 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250169512808 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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