People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A human is naturally driven by a wide range of emotions. These emotions may include hunger, urge to earn money, anger, patroitism and many more, so the inclusion of emotion in any decision is a natural phenomenon and decision is based on a variety of emotions.
Firstly, while deciding to choose their careers or the main aim of living the lives, soldiers or freedom fighters have decided to choose what their emotion was and not what was logical. Patroitism as an emotion has helped many to decide their careers which included risking their lives for the safety of their nation. For e.g. Mahatma Gandhi chose to leave practicing law and fight for independence of India, this decision was purely emotional and not what was logical and then he achieved what he intended to do.
Secondly, for businesses, emotion has been a great driving force. When Apple was founded by Steve Jobs, it was his love for technology that made him do so. He was committed to delivering the world new and technologically advanced products.Although, this vey emotion had him ousted from the company later on but, he was dedicated his life to this emotion.
Finally, there are events where someone has lost a great deal because of emotions, but without emotions they wouldn't have done things in the first place.
In the end, I would like to conclude that, emotion makes us do things that would not have been possible otherwise, which includes the decision that we make when we encounter problems following that emotion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...w and technologically advanced products.Although, this vey emotion had him ousted from t...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... of emotions, but without emotions they wouldnt have done things in the first place. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90980392157 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60845931096 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2271286836 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.21951772744 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144907388238 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574299134288 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514579389619 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797631926962 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452140099401 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.